for Work Hazard10/5/2006 c8 Andie
Oh poor Andrew
Heh I can Imagine Neiji like some kind of mother-hen when Sasuke calls. it makes me giggle meh, Oh Kakashi has to fight alone, but I don't worry much about him he can take care of himself, he is a big boy.. and with Itachi probably driving like a mad-man to get his little brother.. He will get help soon enough heh
I loved the chapter, the sex scene was fun and hot
heh great job!
Oh poor Andrew
Heh I can Imagine Neiji like some kind of mother-hen when Sasuke calls. it makes me giggle meh, Oh Kakashi has to fight alone, but I don't worry much about him he can take care of himself, he is a big boy.. and with Itachi probably driving like a mad-man to get his little brother.. He will get help soon enough heh
I loved the chapter, the sex scene was fun and hot
heh great job!
10/5/2006 c8 viciouscallisto
i'm so happy right now! this chapter kicked ass! the kakasasu was amazing...m, yummy. so i guess this means that orochimaru-sama was getting impatiant with kakashi, huh? oh shit, itachi is gonna be pissed. i'm so excited for the next chapter! i hope orochimaru-sama molests sasuke-kun= ^_^=
i'm so happy right now! this chapter kicked ass! the kakasasu was amazing...m, yummy. so i guess this means that orochimaru-sama was getting impatiant with kakashi, huh? oh shit, itachi is gonna be pissed. i'm so excited for the next chapter! i hope orochimaru-sama molests sasuke-kun= ^_^=
10/5/2006 c8 
72Odyssion
I enjoyed this chapter the most so far. ^^ More plot, more action, more... KakaSasu. It was lovely. The other chapters were great too. I wish I could leave a more comprehensive review, but my mind has turned to mush at the moment. Just know that it was great.
72OdyssionI enjoyed this chapter the most so far. ^^ More plot, more action, more... KakaSasu. It was lovely. The other chapters were great too. I wish I could leave a more comprehensive review, but my mind has turned to mush at the moment. Just know that it was great.
10/5/2006 c8 3setsuko teshiba
DO YOU EVEN HAVE TO ASK?
OFCOURSE I LOVE IT!
it's soo cute!
plz update soon.
3setsuko teshibaDO YOU EVEN HAVE TO ASK?
OFCOURSE I LOVE IT!
it's soo cute!
plz update soon.
10/5/2006 c8 no name for now
Aww, it's great to see a writer who actually likes her story and isn't writing it mostly to get reviews.
Yay, smut! Smut smut smut. Cute smut. I'm so happy.
I really can't wait to see Itachi's reaction (and Neji and Naruto. By the way, does Naruto also has feelings for him or it's more a "you're like my brother/best friend" feeling?). Itachi is going to kill somebody. He will kill more people if he finds out that his foolish little brother had sex *grins*
Poor Sasuke ... That being said, I loved the chapter. I think it's my favorite so far.
Aww, it's great to see a writer who actually likes her story and isn't writing it mostly to get reviews.
Yay, smut! Smut smut smut. Cute smut. I'm so happy.
I really can't wait to see Itachi's reaction (and Neji and Naruto. By the way, does Naruto also has feelings for him or it's more a "you're like my brother/best friend" feeling?). Itachi is going to kill somebody. He will kill more people if he finds out that his foolish little brother had sex *grins*
Poor Sasuke ... That being said, I loved the chapter. I think it's my favorite so far.
10/5/2006 c8 2Luna-Lunak
Yeah! I love this chapter too! Firstly we have Sasuke in KKakashis room. Secondly we have Kakashi and Sasuke having sex. Thirdly we have pissed off Itachi and Hyuuga, Lastly we have Sasuke being drugged (again) and Kakashi fighting for him! (AW! SO ROMANTIC! ;)
Lemon was great. Teasing, and childlike speech which Sasuke used to make himself more confident. I loved it. And I totally love how Sasuke swears. I know that cursing is wad be does it so funny and just RIGHT. Becouse, come on, in some fics our beloved Sasuke (and even more often Gaara) swears every second word. When people write it like that fic loses it's taste. But when you use it propely to emphase things it gaves story another great side.
'Dead. If Itachi doesn't kill me, Neji will. Christ, shit and fuck too for that matter.' is my personal favorite line from this chapter ^_^.
Now be a good author and go write next chapter! Shu!
2Luna-LunakYeah! I love this chapter too! Firstly we have Sasuke in KKakashis room. Secondly we have Kakashi and Sasuke having sex. Thirdly we have pissed off Itachi and Hyuuga, Lastly we have Sasuke being drugged (again) and Kakashi fighting for him! (AW! SO ROMANTIC! ;)
Lemon was great. Teasing, and childlike speech which Sasuke used to make himself more confident. I loved it. And I totally love how Sasuke swears. I know that cursing is wad be does it so funny and just RIGHT. Becouse, come on, in some fics our beloved Sasuke (and even more often Gaara) swears every second word. When people write it like that fic loses it's taste. But when you use it propely to emphase things it gaves story another great side.
'Dead. If Itachi doesn't kill me, Neji will. Christ, shit and fuck too for that matter.' is my personal favorite line from this chapter ^_^.
Now be a good author and go write next chapter! Shu!
10/4/2006 c8 15Kakarots-Frying-Pan
OMG the descriptions... everything just WOW... The scene was just amazing... how many times have I used that word in these reviews... I reall need to get a thesarus... I could picture this all in my head it was so descriptive I love it. No half-assed bullshit un-needed words or anything. It was perfectly written.
[Sasuke feels an answering smirk on his lips and he looks up at Kakashi, eyes wide and bottom lip bitten in that falsely innocent expression, “But mister... it's so big!”
A short bark of laughter escapes Kakashi and it's hot and lustful and amused and completely alien. “Cute. Now what're you going to do with it?”
The mischief of the play has Sasuke completely forgetting nervousness and he grins, “Well what do kids do with foreign objects?”]
Favorite lines ever! That response from Sasuke, I couldn't stop laughing. Kakashi's dick is a foreign object~!
The end.. What a cliffhanger, I'm on the edge of my seat seriously. Please have Chapter 9 out soon. Do Kakashi and Itachi team up? Oh dear and how does Itachi take the news that Kakashi and Sasuke are... well... What does Itachi know about them...? Yeah... no words really just that Kakashi pretty much... and Sasuke did... AND SASUKE'S A MINOR, WHAT? hehe Loved this chapter!
15Kakarots-Frying-PanOMG the descriptions... everything just WOW... The scene was just amazing... how many times have I used that word in these reviews... I reall need to get a thesarus... I could picture this all in my head it was so descriptive I love it. No half-assed bullshit un-needed words or anything. It was perfectly written.
[Sasuke feels an answering smirk on his lips and he looks up at Kakashi, eyes wide and bottom lip bitten in that falsely innocent expression, “But mister... it's so big!”
A short bark of laughter escapes Kakashi and it's hot and lustful and amused and completely alien. “Cute. Now what're you going to do with it?”
The mischief of the play has Sasuke completely forgetting nervousness and he grins, “Well what do kids do with foreign objects?”]
Favorite lines ever! That response from Sasuke, I couldn't stop laughing. Kakashi's dick is a foreign object~!
The end.. What a cliffhanger, I'm on the edge of my seat seriously. Please have Chapter 9 out soon. Do Kakashi and Itachi team up? Oh dear and how does Itachi take the news that Kakashi and Sasuke are... well... What does Itachi know about them...? Yeah... no words really just that Kakashi pretty much... and Sasuke did... AND SASUKE'S A MINOR, WHAT? hehe Loved this chapter!
10/4/2006 c8 16Lapse - Raevn
I loved this chapter.
I agree with you! xD "Laughing kisses are the best brand. Sex, no matter how intense, should always be fun." And..that wasn't even the story - but author notes are fun too! Haha.
Maybe it's just me, but I was confused a bit at the beginning. Was Kakashi asking Sasuke if he was hot or cold, or if he wanted a drink..?
..Reading that over, I guess it's probably asking him how he was. ._.;
Kakashi's sarcasm-in-his-head is so much fun. xD I can't phrase that right, long school day. :P
I loved when he spoke when he didn't mean to, saying “How did you do that?”, quietly. And "There's the surreal feel of intimacy.." was so so pretty.
Hehe, the sex scene was so awesomes. x3 There was just enough hesitance and Kakashi knowing that it was Sasuke's first time..it was sweet. :D And there were just enough humorous moments.
"..the side of his neck where he proceeds to suck and bite until he can taste the mark." Ahah, I love you. x3
Sasuke playing innocent was so...well, out of character and IN character at the same time. It makes no sense, but..oh well.
16Lapse - RaevnI loved this chapter.
I agree with you! xD "Laughing kisses are the best brand. Sex, no matter how intense, should always be fun." And..that wasn't even the story - but author notes are fun too! Haha.
Maybe it's just me, but I was confused a bit at the beginning. Was Kakashi asking Sasuke if he was hot or cold, or if he wanted a drink..?
..Reading that over, I guess it's probably asking him how he was. ._.;
Kakashi's sarcasm-in-his-head is so much fun. xD I can't phrase that right, long school day. :P
I loved when he spoke when he didn't mean to, saying “How did you do that?”, quietly. And "There's the surreal feel of intimacy.." was so so pretty.
Hehe, the sex scene was so awesomes. x3 There was just enough hesitance and Kakashi knowing that it was Sasuke's first time..it was sweet. :D And there were just enough humorous moments.
"..the side of his neck where he proceeds to suck and bite until he can taste the mark." Ahah, I love you. x3
Sasuke playing innocent was so...well, out of character and IN character at the same time. It makes no sense, but..oh well.
10/4/2006 c8 Tajiko
I LOVE this chapter! The begining with Kakashi and Sasuke was so...Hot! -^^- And so much action! Keep up the good work and try to update soon if you can! ^^
I LOVE this chapter! The begining with Kakashi and Sasuke was so...Hot! -^^- And so much action! Keep up the good work and try to update soon if you can! ^^
10/4/2006 c8 6Bennylucerne
Oh...My...GOD!
I absolutley love this story! You must write more, NOW!
You have a great talent, keep up the great work!
...How did you get such a good idea for this anyway? I would have never thought of ever doign something like this!
6BennylucerneOh...My...GOD!
I absolutley love this story! You must write more, NOW!
You have a great talent, keep up the great work!
...How did you get such a good idea for this anyway? I would have never thought of ever doign something like this!
10/4/2006 c8 34Lisea18
you're trying to kill me? huh? lol To stop HERE... tsk tsk lol
during the whole fight I was "Kakashi come on, he needs you" lol at last he comes!
The love scene was nice ^-^
aw I want to see how itachi is going to react lol
updated soon! ^-^
34Lisea18you're trying to kill me? huh? lol To stop HERE... tsk tsk lol
during the whole fight I was "Kakashi come on, he needs you" lol at last he comes!
The love scene was nice ^-^
aw I want to see how itachi is going to react lol
updated soon! ^-^
10/3/2006 c7 nyeh
good! XD and thanks...
this chapter was... wow. i didnt expect sasuke to find out about naruto that soon. i dont think you conveyed his feelings well enough, though. i think you couldve spent a little more time on it.
i love the way you wrote sasuke and itachi's relationship; he wants itachi to learn to love other people but likes that he's the only one he loves. that kisame ring thing is a good example.
that last part with kakashi and sasuke? oh the possibilities...
ah! cant wait for next chap!
good! XD and thanks...
this chapter was... wow. i didnt expect sasuke to find out about naruto that soon. i dont think you conveyed his feelings well enough, though. i think you couldve spent a little more time on it.
i love the way you wrote sasuke and itachi's relationship; he wants itachi to learn to love other people but likes that he's the only one he loves. that kisame ring thing is a good example.
that last part with kakashi and sasuke? oh the possibilities...
ah! cant wait for next chap!
10/2/2006 c7 toast and crackers
once again great chapter, and oh my kakashi and sasuke in a car..alone hehehe yay brownie points XD they should so go twards something ^^ well anyways can't wait till the next chapter!
once again great chapter, and oh my kakashi and sasuke in a car..alone hehehe yay brownie points XD they should so go twards something ^^ well anyways can't wait till the next chapter!
10/2/2006 c7 viciouscallisto
fuck yeah! i love kakashi so much! i must say that i absolutely love the cliffhanger for this chapter. this is an awesome story. i'm loving all the characters, especially the uchiha brothers; its a very good look at their more than slightly obsessive relationship with one another. i cannot wait for more kakasasu and i am so excited to see what itachi's reaction would be. you are doing a kick ass job!
fuck yeah! i love kakashi so much! i must say that i absolutely love the cliffhanger for this chapter. this is an awesome story. i'm loving all the characters, especially the uchiha brothers; its a very good look at their more than slightly obsessive relationship with one another. i cannot wait for more kakasasu and i am so excited to see what itachi's reaction would be. you are doing a kick ass job!