for Work Hazard9/23/2006 c5 
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*applauds incredible chapter* Yet again another captivating chapter. It just gets better and better. So how does Orochimaru get Sasuke, 'cause it seems that's exactly what this is leading up to. If Kakashi refuses then who does his job?
15Kakarots-Frying-Pan*applauds incredible chapter* Yet again another captivating chapter. It just gets better and better. So how does Orochimaru get Sasuke, 'cause it seems that's exactly what this is leading up to. If Kakashi refuses then who does his job?
9/23/2006 c5 toast and crackers
*WoW* i just found this fic and i'm soo glad i did! kakasasu is my favorite pairing and this fic so far is on my top two favorites list! pleasepleaseplease don't tell me this will be your only one i'll be crying in the corner if it is x.x
*WoW* i just found this fic and i'm soo glad i did! kakasasu is my favorite pairing and this fic so far is on my top two favorites list! pleasepleaseplease don't tell me this will be your only one i'll be crying in the corner if it is x.x
9/23/2006 c5 34Lisea18
hi again lol
great chapter too! I love Kakashi lol thoses were only teaser? my god lol You're going to kill me with this story ^-^
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Congratulation!
Lisea
34Lisea18hi again lol
great chapter too! I love Kakashi lol thoses were only teaser? my god lol You're going to kill me with this story ^-^
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Congratulation!
Lisea
9/23/2006 c4 Lisea18
you killed Kisame? but I love Kisame lol (I knew Sai was bad! because I just don't love him lool)
well, I'm going to read the next chapter now ^-^ (I will review it too lol)
Yes dream Kakashi is cool too (because he's nice enough to stop when Sasuke say "no" ^-^)
great story!
Lisea
you killed Kisame? but I love Kisame lol (I knew Sai was bad! because I just don't love him lool)
well, I'm going to read the next chapter now ^-^ (I will review it too lol)
Yes dream Kakashi is cool too (because he's nice enough to stop when Sasuke say "no" ^-^)
great story!
Lisea
9/23/2006 c5 5EvilChibi
I shall bestow you with the most useless of reviews. :D
OMG! SQUEE! I love it! Write more!
And this concludes the useless review.
5EvilChibiI shall bestow you with the most useless of reviews. :D
OMG! SQUEE! I love it! Write more!
And this concludes the useless review.
9/23/2006 c4 2Luna-Lunak
As always I liked it. Poor Kisame, I liked him. I didn't like Sai though. I pity Sasuke a littel for all this running away, and for the fact that he can't belive that Neji truly cares for him in private manier (becouse really, Neji is not making it easy to belive him about that). And I pity him him coz they didn't tell him that Naruto is bodyguard too. But of course he would have killed me if he heared that. Uchiha aren't pited by ANYONE. It's the same as 'Uchiha doesn't blush' and 'Uchiha doesn't get lost... after first time.' (loves the last one).
2Luna-LunakAs always I liked it. Poor Kisame, I liked him. I didn't like Sai though. I pity Sasuke a littel for all this running away, and for the fact that he can't belive that Neji truly cares for him in private manier (becouse really, Neji is not making it easy to belive him about that). And I pity him him coz they didn't tell him that Naruto is bodyguard too. But of course he would have killed me if he heared that. Uchiha aren't pited by ANYONE. It's the same as 'Uchiha doesn't blush' and 'Uchiha doesn't get lost... after first time.' (loves the last one).
9/22/2006 c4 15Kakarots-Frying-Pan
Poor Kisame... You'd think he would've seen that one coming *sigh* He must be getting old... or just too damn horny for his own good. At least that HOTT (yes with 2 t's) almost sex scene-dream led up to an interesting display of Sasuke's instinctive self defense act ^.~ In all this chapter is terrific and I most certainly cannot wait for the next one.
And I totally agree with you on the whole not considering age factor in most fics. You want them to be together, but you gotta have a little more thought than just He's hot, he's hot too, who's cares one is underage, lets just have them fuck already. Those are good for PWP's but for an actual story it makes it more interesting this way. ^-^
15Kakarots-Frying-PanPoor Kisame... You'd think he would've seen that one coming *sigh* He must be getting old... or just too damn horny for his own good. At least that HOTT (yes with 2 t's) almost sex scene-dream led up to an interesting display of Sasuke's instinctive self defense act ^.~ In all this chapter is terrific and I most certainly cannot wait for the next one.
And I totally agree with you on the whole not considering age factor in most fics. You want them to be together, but you gotta have a little more thought than just He's hot, he's hot too, who's cares one is underage, lets just have them fuck already. Those are good for PWP's but for an actual story it makes it more interesting this way. ^-^
9/22/2006 c5 nyeh
oh... sasuke and kakashi's first "confrontation" as target/hitman. that was pretty darn smexy.
i love kisame's words of wisdom, especially the very first quote.
eh, not much else to say but to keep up the sexyness and update soon!
oh... sasuke and kakashi's first "confrontation" as target/hitman. that was pretty darn smexy.
i love kisame's words of wisdom, especially the very first quote.
eh, not much else to say but to keep up the sexyness and update soon!
9/22/2006 c5 3x-ellore
Ahahaha. I love how Kakashi just suddenly shows up, and catches him.
And Sasuke should've snapped at Sakura. I woulda been like 'grawr!'
...Yup. Happy days, when I see that you update. =)
I'm waiting fo the next chapter! ;)
3x-elloreAhahaha. I love how Kakashi just suddenly shows up, and catches him.
And Sasuke should've snapped at Sakura. I woulda been like 'grawr!'
...Yup. Happy days, when I see that you update. =)
I'm waiting fo the next chapter! ;)
9/22/2006 c4 nyeh
mister cocktease... *snicker*
wow! this chapter had some serious action! damn that sai. i disliked him from the start. what a way to be woken up, though. and from a dream like that? yeesh.
naruto and neji are working pretty close. is naruto a bodyguard too? because neji immidiately calls him after getting the call from sasuke. plus naruto's in contact with itachi. hmm? his stealth skills are... funky.
mister cocktease... *snicker*
wow! this chapter had some serious action! damn that sai. i disliked him from the start. what a way to be woken up, though. and from a dream like that? yeesh.
naruto and neji are working pretty close. is naruto a bodyguard too? because neji immidiately calls him after getting the call from sasuke. plus naruto's in contact with itachi. hmm? his stealth skills are... funky.
9/22/2006 c3 nyeh
AAH! im sorry for not reviewing! internet problems...troublesome.
can you do no wrong in my eyes!
you made sasuke a smoker! that upped his overall sexyness by 10%. naruto and neji's note conversation was funny although i would kill my friends if they told me that.
AAH! im sorry for not reviewing! internet problems...troublesome.
can you do no wrong in my eyes!
you made sasuke a smoker! that upped his overall sexyness by 10%. naruto and neji's note conversation was funny although i would kill my friends if they told me that.
9/22/2006 c5 Tajiko
Great story, I love it and I just love Sasuke too. -^^- Awesome chapter by the way and I really thing that Neji should have a thing for Sasuke(Heh heh..Yeah I'm a big Nejisasu fan..Too bad there arn't that many fics with that pairing though) and...Naruto..I like Narusasu too, but it's your choice. Anyway, keep up the good work! -^^-
Great story, I love it and I just love Sasuke too. -^^- Awesome chapter by the way and I really thing that Neji should have a thing for Sasuke(Heh heh..Yeah I'm a big Nejisasu fan..Too bad there arn't that many fics with that pairing though) and...Naruto..I like Narusasu too, but it's your choice. Anyway, keep up the good work! -^^-
9/21/2006 c4 4EvilS
E! You updated TYTYTYTYTYTYTYTY! ^_^ I love this story so much! That poor Kisame guy! I really did like him, and Sai! Wow, I never would have guessed it! So...? Is there like a thing that Neji has for Sasuke? HMZ? ^_^ Its so interesting now i'll put it in my fav storys list! Please update soon! *hugs* E! ^_^
4EvilSE! You updated TYTYTYTYTYTYTYTY! ^_^ I love this story so much! That poor Kisame guy! I really did like him, and Sai! Wow, I never would have guessed it! So...? Is there like a thing that Neji has for Sasuke? HMZ? ^_^ Its so interesting now i'll put it in my fav storys list! Please update soon! *hugs* E! ^_^
9/21/2006 c4 16Lapse - Raevn
Marry you as soon as I'm legal. Haha. xD But anyway, I can definitely see Sasuke seeing the whole bodyguard thing as a betrayal. (Not sure how he missed it, tho', because he's just so sighted into everything else..)
..Of course Gai will be around - the comedic relief he provides is amazing. :P And whoo, Kakasasu! /thud/
Neji, neji. It's somewhat sad, the relationship he has with Sasuke. And Sasuke's too in-deep to think that they could just be normal friends; that he himself could just have -friends-. Without weird ties. :/
Kisame died - that was sad. Because I loved how you wrote him, and that's rare. And Sai was surprising - I seemed to get the feeling that he was trustworthy.
..Oh well. And I'm waiting for Itachi to pop up. :O
“He's a good kid. Too damn good for the likes of you and me, slut. Keep that in mind.” Did I mention I love this line? :D:D Anyway, still in love with your fic. x3 Can't wait.
16Lapse - RaevnMarry you as soon as I'm legal. Haha. xD But anyway, I can definitely see Sasuke seeing the whole bodyguard thing as a betrayal. (Not sure how he missed it, tho', because he's just so sighted into everything else..)
..Of course Gai will be around - the comedic relief he provides is amazing. :P And whoo, Kakasasu! /thud/
Neji, neji. It's somewhat sad, the relationship he has with Sasuke. And Sasuke's too in-deep to think that they could just be normal friends; that he himself could just have -friends-. Without weird ties. :/
Kisame died - that was sad. Because I loved how you wrote him, and that's rare. And Sai was surprising - I seemed to get the feeling that he was trustworthy.
..Oh well. And I'm waiting for Itachi to pop up. :O
“He's a good kid. Too damn good for the likes of you and me, slut. Keep that in mind.” Did I mention I love this line? :D:D Anyway, still in love with your fic. x3 Can't wait.