for Work Hazard1/7/2009 c11 howl
hah. this is definitely a big cliffhanger. this chapter reeks with grotosque goodness. i'll be looking forward on the next chapter.
hah. this is definitely a big cliffhanger. this chapter reeks with grotosque goodness. i'll be looking forward on the next chapter.
1/7/2009 c9 howl
Ouch. Somehow the 'interrogation' scene between kakashi and itachi reminds me a lot of that episode where kakashi gets tortured by itachi's scary jutsu. The last part had me feeling sorry for sasuke and also the fact that he last thought of his brother seemed pretty sound to me instead of thinking of kakashi the last.
Ouch. Somehow the 'interrogation' scene between kakashi and itachi reminds me a lot of that episode where kakashi gets tortured by itachi's scary jutsu. The last part had me feeling sorry for sasuke and also the fact that he last thought of his brother seemed pretty sound to me instead of thinking of kakashi the last.
1/7/2009 c7 howl
I like the flow and the characterization in this chapter. From the tender moment between the brothers (one which I find rare read in this site) to kakashi suddenly asking sasuke for a ride...hmm or maybe it was someone else? Well, I'll find out soon.
I like the flow and the characterization in this chapter. From the tender moment between the brothers (one which I find rare read in this site) to kakashi suddenly asking sasuke for a ride...hmm or maybe it was someone else? Well, I'll find out soon.
1/7/2009 c6 howl
thank you God for this chapter! This is by far my favorite chapter. There's just too many memorable scenes in here. I especially like how you portrayed Kakashi and his 'thoughts' here...practically fresh and original. I love every part of it especially with Obito calling him, "chicken knew chicken knew".
thank you God for this chapter! This is by far my favorite chapter. There's just too many memorable scenes in here. I especially like how you portrayed Kakashi and his 'thoughts' here...practically fresh and original. I love every part of it especially with Obito calling him, "chicken knew chicken knew".
1/7/2009 c5 howl
bah! that kakasasu scene was such a cliffhanger! But I guess there'll be more to come later right? And heck yeah Itachi's about to make his appearance!
bah! that kakasasu scene was such a cliffhanger! But I guess there'll be more to come later right? And heck yeah Itachi's about to make his appearance!
1/7/2009 c4 howl
...sai you - *clickes on the next chapter anyway*
...sai you - *clickes on the next chapter anyway*
1/7/2009 c3 howl
I didn't expect Neji to be Sasuke's bodyguard. Naruto, is he more than just an annoying friend or perhaps he's another bodyguard Sasuke doesn't know? Well, I'll just have to read on to find out ne?
I didn't expect Neji to be Sasuke's bodyguard. Naruto, is he more than just an annoying friend or perhaps he's another bodyguard Sasuke doesn't know? Well, I'll just have to read on to find out ne?
1/7/2009 c2 howl
chapter 2. Damn it that was something unexpected. Usually it'll take two more chapters before a make-out scene but this is ...damn. You got me. This is good.
chapter 2. Damn it that was something unexpected. Usually it'll take two more chapters before a make-out scene but this is ...damn. You got me. This is good.
1/7/2009 c1 howl
i'm practically new to this pairing, but your first chapter just entices me to read on. Therefore...I'll read on.
i'm practically new to this pairing, but your first chapter just entices me to read on. Therefore...I'll read on.
9/18/2008 c11 yaoirulz especially sasUKE
... That was FREAKING AWESOME! I do hope you'll update sometime soon! ^_^
... That was FREAKING AWESOME! I do hope you'll update sometime soon! ^_^
9/17/2008 c4 yaoirulz especially sasUKE
WHY? Why did you have to kill Kisame? Sasuke must be soo pained that someone he cares for died!
WHY? Why did you have to kill Kisame? Sasuke must be soo pained that someone he cares for died!
6/3/2008 c11 deamon.m
will you continue ? i mean it was one of the best chapters in this story and you just stopped ... it isn´t fair ...
will you continue ? i mean it was one of the best chapters in this story and you just stopped ... it isn´t fair ...
4/22/2008 c11 foreststreet
You stopped after the best chapter! This had such amazing potential too! Do you intend on writing anymore?
You stopped after the best chapter! This had such amazing potential too! Do you intend on writing anymore?
4/21/2008 c11 
3aikotina
I absolutly love this story. I don't understand why you stopped? It seems like such a well developed and intricate plot line, that i would figure you'd be able to finish it; and i hope, you still do. despite the two year lack of writing, i still hope you to continue. thank you so far; for the wonderful story.
3aikotinaI absolutly love this story. I don't understand why you stopped? It seems like such a well developed and intricate plot line, that i would figure you'd be able to finish it; and i hope, you still do. despite the two year lack of writing, i still hope you to continue. thank you so far; for the wonderful story.