for Work Hazard1/14/2008 c11 colgate.advanced.fresh
GREAT story XD :( he's going to break sasuke :/ lol update soon x x x x
GREAT story XD :( he's going to break sasuke :/ lol update soon x x x x
11/28/2007 c2 
4Shinigami Clara
kakasasu...itanaru? (cause itachi needs someone too :D) ok... yah..random comment done... i'm going to continue reading now :D (so far so good.. me like)
4Shinigami Clarakakasasu...itanaru? (cause itachi needs someone too :D) ok... yah..random comment done... i'm going to continue reading now :D (so far so good.. me like)
11/7/2007 c8 9secret25
Sasuke feels an answering smirk on his lips and he looks up at Kakashi, eyes wide and bottom lip bitten in that falsely innocent expression, “But mister... it's so big!”
kyaa! i can't help but picture this! so cute!
9secret25Sasuke feels an answering smirk on his lips and he looks up at Kakashi, eyes wide and bottom lip bitten in that falsely innocent expression, “But mister... it's so big!”
kyaa! i can't help but picture this! so cute!
11/7/2007 c11 secret25
hey its secret25 here! i love your fic its great i love itachi here i don't really care if he still tortures people and all that crap as long as his nice to his little brother! but of course i didn't like itachi when he hurt kakashi...anyway what happens to sasuke? i hope he gets out i'm also glad to hear that he won't be waiting for rescue,,do your best sasuke!i hate you orochimaru don't lay a finger on sasuke anymore!lol
i hope you continue on with the fic!
hey its secret25 here! i love your fic its great i love itachi here i don't really care if he still tortures people and all that crap as long as his nice to his little brother! but of course i didn't like itachi when he hurt kakashi...anyway what happens to sasuke? i hope he gets out i'm also glad to hear that he won't be waiting for rescue,,do your best sasuke!i hate you orochimaru don't lay a finger on sasuke anymore!lol
i hope you continue on with the fic!
9/26/2007 c11 viciouscallisto
*sigh* i miss the lack of updates. this story is really amazing and i hope you haven't abandoned it 'cause that would be such a loss.
*sigh* i miss the lack of updates. this story is really amazing and i hope you haven't abandoned it 'cause that would be such a loss.
9/13/2007 c11 2daffyduck x3
so god! kakashi go kick some ass! i love this fic a lot. its been some time since you last updated. are you going to continue?
2daffyduck x3so god! kakashi go kick some ass! i love this fic a lot. its been some time since you last updated. are you going to continue?
9/12/2007 c11 2MoonKoi
well... for an insane guy, he kinda makes sense. I can't believe I just said that about snake guy. I hope Katashi and Itachi make it in time like way before snake guy puts his evil plans on Sasuke. I read all 11 chapters in one sitting, and it had a line I do not know which chapter, it was "Better get used to it. He's almost family." I all I could of think of is the things you got to get used cause you like Sasuke. Next would be the whole scene where Itachi (shudders)peeling Katashi skin. Katashi thought about asking him to date his brother, I was like "not unless you want to find yourself RAW." Then that line about knowing you were insane and accepting line, I have to agree that is dangerous man, then the whole Sasuke special lunch, i have to tell u something i was eating pizza at the time, so yeah, *stomach turns* couldn't finish that pizza. Last thing would be the whole Kisame and Sasuke scene where Sasuke ask him if he is in love with Itachi. Man that was sad.
Anyway let me wrap this up, I like your story and I hope you update soon.
2MoonKoiwell... for an insane guy, he kinda makes sense. I can't believe I just said that about snake guy. I hope Katashi and Itachi make it in time like way before snake guy puts his evil plans on Sasuke. I read all 11 chapters in one sitting, and it had a line I do not know which chapter, it was "Better get used to it. He's almost family." I all I could of think of is the things you got to get used cause you like Sasuke. Next would be the whole scene where Itachi (shudders)peeling Katashi skin. Katashi thought about asking him to date his brother, I was like "not unless you want to find yourself RAW." Then that line about knowing you were insane and accepting line, I have to agree that is dangerous man, then the whole Sasuke special lunch, i have to tell u something i was eating pizza at the time, so yeah, *stomach turns* couldn't finish that pizza. Last thing would be the whole Kisame and Sasuke scene where Sasuke ask him if he is in love with Itachi. Man that was sad.
Anyway let me wrap this up, I like your story and I hope you update soon.
8/21/2007 c11 4XSilentX-XShadowsX
Hey. This is an amazing story and cannot wait for the next installment. Are you going to continue this fic?
4XSilentX-XShadowsXHey. This is an amazing story and cannot wait for the next installment. Are you going to continue this fic?
8/9/2007 c11 9edluver333
This whole chapter was actually pretty disturbing, and I have no weak stomache, so that's saying something. I guess it's just the creepy masochism and just... I dunno, utter wierdness of orochimaru... It was a good chapter, nonetheless. I hope to see more soon! ^-^
9edluver333This whole chapter was actually pretty disturbing, and I have no weak stomache, so that's saying something. I guess it's just the creepy masochism and just... I dunno, utter wierdness of orochimaru... It was a good chapter, nonetheless. I hope to see more soon! ^-^
8/9/2007 c9 rainee
Good chapter. Ending was good... A lil' depressing... But anyway, keep it up!
Good chapter. Ending was good... A lil' depressing... But anyway, keep it up!
7/25/2007 c11 5Firefly's Rebirth
so...do you plan on updating this story anytime soon? Because i just happened upon it and i find it highly intriguing and very well written as well. So if you please, do update soon.
5Firefly's Rebirthso...do you plan on updating this story anytime soon? Because i just happened upon it and i find it highly intriguing and very well written as well. So if you please, do update soon.
7/15/2007 c11 YekaMoo
You're brilliant, brilliant I tell you! Reading this chapter made me wanna become evil and kidnap pretty people and wash their hair D: oh my
You're brilliant, brilliant I tell you! Reading this chapter made me wanna become evil and kidnap pretty people and wash their hair D: oh my
7/4/2007 c11 4LastRain
NEW READER
wow... the last sentence Orochimaru said almost killed me! Your story is pure genius! god i love it...
please please update soon, but don't hurt Sasuke... T_T
4LastRainNEW READER
wow... the last sentence Orochimaru said almost killed me! Your story is pure genius! god i love it...
please please update soon, but don't hurt Sasuke... T_T
7/1/2007 c11 Jester08
Excellent story! Poor Sasuke, hopefully Itachi, Kakashi, and company will save him soon! Why is Naruto at a whorehouse...I didn't really get that part? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the amazing work! ^_^
Excellent story! Poor Sasuke, hopefully Itachi, Kakashi, and company will save him soon! Why is Naruto at a whorehouse...I didn't really get that part? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the amazing work! ^_^