for Twisted10/8/2020 c2 LoVesexonastick58
This story so intrigues me. I can't wait to keep reading. You can really spin a tale.
This story so intrigues me. I can't wait to keep reading. You can really spin a tale.
4/14/2020 c6 Guest
This is so good. Thank you for writing this story.
This is so good. Thank you for writing this story.
7/20/2019 c8 
2grimmich
OK time to poke some holes. how are they not connecting the obvious?! Lily's file is missing, the kanes already tampered with the murder obviously, veronica got a motive from logan via duncan, they have Clarence weidman ex alphabet soup, they have the photos used to run Lianne out of town, from jakes reaction during the Christmas party (to immediately ask Celeste what she did), to the obvious claiming by Jake despite what it will mean for his family... I dont know about you but to me it is obviously adding up to Celeste having put a hit out on Keith. The fact that it took so long to come to the conclusion of the Russian mob makes it an obvious cover up like someone went, "oh shit someone's asking around, better through them off the trail to somewhere most people wot dare ask questions. I mean come on, how stupid did you make them in this? and now After all their declarations your gonna have Logan just walk away from Veronica because she MIGHT die? Leaving her alone in the house with the Kane's just like that? Must not love her a whole lot them, because if he really loved her then he would have been right next to her the whole time so that if she DID die then he would either have been seconds before her or seconds after her.
2grimmichOK time to poke some holes. how are they not connecting the obvious?! Lily's file is missing, the kanes already tampered with the murder obviously, veronica got a motive from logan via duncan, they have Clarence weidman ex alphabet soup, they have the photos used to run Lianne out of town, from jakes reaction during the Christmas party (to immediately ask Celeste what she did), to the obvious claiming by Jake despite what it will mean for his family... I dont know about you but to me it is obviously adding up to Celeste having put a hit out on Keith. The fact that it took so long to come to the conclusion of the Russian mob makes it an obvious cover up like someone went, "oh shit someone's asking around, better through them off the trail to somewhere most people wot dare ask questions. I mean come on, how stupid did you make them in this? and now After all their declarations your gonna have Logan just walk away from Veronica because she MIGHT die? Leaving her alone in the house with the Kane's just like that? Must not love her a whole lot them, because if he really loved her then he would have been right next to her the whole time so that if she DID die then he would either have been seconds before her or seconds after her.
7/19/2019 c2 grimmich
...why is she getting a guardian? with only seven months to go she could have/should have just been emancipated especially seeing as her mother is unable and unwilling to take care of her.
...why is she getting a guardian? with only seven months to go she could have/should have just been emancipated especially seeing as her mother is unable and unwilling to take care of her.
7/19/2019 c1 grimmich
ummmm if she had back up with her- " Back-Up is whining, pressing his body against me as I bury my head into his neck, crying uncontrollably." Then how is she in Logan's bed?
ummmm if she had back up with her- " Back-Up is whining, pressing his body against me as I bury my head into his neck, crying uncontrollably." Then how is she in Logan's bed?
5/29/2018 c8 paganraimi
Two words away from 10000 baby and what wonderful words they are. Love this can't wait to see how they bring down Lily's murder, and Who Killed Keith? are they the same person or is it two separate cases? Will Backup bite Celeste's botox face? How will the kids at school react to V being a Kane. How will Logan react to finding out V was raped. And LoVe making LoVe Yowwza Can't wait for those answers. Great job Loving your OC Sam Great plot can't wait to see what you have in store for us on this amazing ride.
Two words away from 10000 baby and what wonderful words they are. Love this can't wait to see how they bring down Lily's murder, and Who Killed Keith? are they the same person or is it two separate cases? Will Backup bite Celeste's botox face? How will the kids at school react to V being a Kane. How will Logan react to finding out V was raped. And LoVe making LoVe Yowwza Can't wait for those answers. Great job Loving your OC Sam Great plot can't wait to see what you have in store for us on this amazing ride.
4/12/2018 c8 marsgamegirl
Wow! I love this story so much, I started reading it this week and couldn't stop (which did not help since I had to study for a test, but oh well, I don't regret it)! The twists are so angsty and dramatic (my favorite kind)! I can't believe that Jake had reacted that way and forced Veronica to move into the house.
I know this story was last updated some time ago, but if you ever decide to come back to it in the future I'll be here waiting! I'm so curious to see your take on Lilly's murder, Keith's murder, Logan and Veronica's budding relationship, how Veronica deals with living in that hell hole of a house, V admiting to Logan about her rape and Duncan confessing to what he did at Shelly's (if you keep that story line), and so much more!
Anyway, thank you for writing these 8 chapters, they are amazing and it was an honor to jump inside the world you have created. I'll save this story in hopes that it continues, but if not I've very much enjoyed every word of it!
Wow! I love this story so much, I started reading it this week and couldn't stop (which did not help since I had to study for a test, but oh well, I don't regret it)! The twists are so angsty and dramatic (my favorite kind)! I can't believe that Jake had reacted that way and forced Veronica to move into the house.
I know this story was last updated some time ago, but if you ever decide to come back to it in the future I'll be here waiting! I'm so curious to see your take on Lilly's murder, Keith's murder, Logan and Veronica's budding relationship, how Veronica deals with living in that hell hole of a house, V admiting to Logan about her rape and Duncan confessing to what he did at Shelly's (if you keep that story line), and so much more!
Anyway, thank you for writing these 8 chapters, they are amazing and it was an honor to jump inside the world you have created. I'll save this story in hopes that it continues, but if not I've very much enjoyed every word of it!
11/23/2016 c8 3frenchbobcat
This fic is so good ... I just would like to know if there's a chance you update one day ? I wonder who killed Keith ?
I wonder what will happen with :
- the cohabitation with the Kane
- the return back to school
- the Lilly Kane Muder
- the relashionship development V & L
...
I know you didn't write a chapter for long but please please please post a new chapter !
3frenchbobcatThis fic is so good ... I just would like to know if there's a chance you update one day ? I wonder who killed Keith ?
I wonder what will happen with :
- the cohabitation with the Kane
- the return back to school
- the Lilly Kane Muder
- the relashionship development V & L
...
I know you didn't write a chapter for long but please please please post a new chapter !