for Soldier5/28/2014 c28 Guest
I cant believe you didn't finish this and have left me hanging!
I cant believe you didn't finish this and have left me hanging!
4/13/2014 c28 
1FourReasons
I love discovering and reading through old fan fics because you find really really good stories like this one, I just wish it was finished!
1FourReasonsI love discovering and reading through old fan fics because you find really really good stories like this one, I just wish it was finished!
3/6/2014 c7 Flameprincess
You write an AMAZING sex scene. Very few people seem to be able to master a well done sex scene that isn't cheesy. It was hot. It was tender. It was sexy.
The rest of the story is pretty awesome so far too! I love how you handled the Ranger/Stephanie thing (even though it hurt my heart, cause I'm a Babe first and foremost. Tart a super close second). And I can't wait to finish reading and see how Lester and Stehp's relationship starts.
You write an AMAZING sex scene. Very few people seem to be able to master a well done sex scene that isn't cheesy. It was hot. It was tender. It was sexy.
The rest of the story is pretty awesome so far too! I love how you handled the Ranger/Stephanie thing (even though it hurt my heart, cause I'm a Babe first and foremost. Tart a super close second). And I can't wait to finish reading and see how Lester and Stehp's relationship starts.
10/27/2013 c28 Guest
I was hesitant about a Steph/Lester story but I love it. He has all of the good Ranger & Joe qualities. I especially like how he left Steph to choose protection something that neither would do. I love the punch to Rangers face too. I would love to see Steph say sorry first and "I love you" first. That would be a first...after this story I ask myself why was i a Babe in the first place. Go lester!
I was hesitant about a Steph/Lester story but I love it. He has all of the good Ranger & Joe qualities. I especially like how he left Steph to choose protection something that neither would do. I love the punch to Rangers face too. I would love to see Steph say sorry first and "I love you" first. That would be a first...after this story I ask myself why was i a Babe in the first place. Go lester!
8/18/2013 c28 Guest
Please finish this! Dont leave us hanging
Please finish this! Dont leave us hanging
5/24/2013 c28 6Potterwench
Please please please finish this or give someone your notes to finish this. It is soliloquy good and deserves to be completed!
6PotterwenchPlease please please finish this or give someone your notes to finish this. It is soliloquy good and deserves to be completed!
4/6/2013 c28 emmme3
I started reading this story today not realizing that it wasn't complete which totally sucks because its an awesome story. I hope one day you decide to finish it
I started reading this story today not realizing that it wasn't complete which totally sucks because its an awesome story. I hope one day you decide to finish it
2/27/2013 c28 MissWendyJane
Great; not only is the story incomplete but it ends with Steph being kidnapped?! Ugh!
Great; not only is the story incomplete but it ends with Steph being kidnapped?! Ugh!
1/22/2013 c28 sg
keeping my fingers crossed that someday you'll update! one of my favourites
keeping my fingers crossed that someday you'll update! one of my favourites
1/16/2013 c28 Guest
I know it isnt likely since its been sooooo long but this is one of my favorite stories ... And there are a lot...It would be great to read the rest
I know it isnt likely since its been sooooo long but this is one of my favorite stories ... And there are a lot...It would be great to read the rest