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7/15/2009 c1 4Joelle Hart
The part about child vampires being the most ruthless of all is a fascinating idea, and your mention of rules of vampirism adds dimension.

But you REALLY need to proofread. There are three typos in the first two sentences alone - and one of them is so silly (you want to say "sense" but you said "senesce", which means to grow old) that it made me laugh and completely distracted me from the plot.
1/3/2008 c1 2KeidaHattori
omg i'm actualy CRYING.
1/10/2007 c1 Watashi
yay Seras mommy! please update soon
12/25/2006 c1 MariaEnpsKerro
I WANT MORE !

lol ^_^;
9/28/2006 c1 5avafreak45
nice!
9/18/2006 c1 3Invader Kit Membrain
please continue
9/14/2006 c1 1WillTheWatcher
Cool mommy Seras! This looks really promising. :)

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