for Parentage Can Change Anyone7/15/2009 c1 
4Joelle Hart
The part about child vampires being the most ruthless of all is a fascinating idea, and your mention of rules of vampirism adds dimension.
But you REALLY need to proofread. There are three typos in the first two sentences alone - and one of them is so silly (you want to say "sense" but you said "senesce", which means to grow old) that it made me laugh and completely distracted me from the plot.
4Joelle HartThe part about child vampires being the most ruthless of all is a fascinating idea, and your mention of rules of vampirism adds dimension.
But you REALLY need to proofread. There are three typos in the first two sentences alone - and one of them is so silly (you want to say "sense" but you said "senesce", which means to grow old) that it made me laugh and completely distracted me from the plot.
1/10/2007 c1 Watashi
yay Seras mommy! please update soon
yay Seras mommy! please update soon
12/25/2006 c1 MariaEnpsKerro
I WANT MORE !
lol ^_^;
I WANT MORE !
lol ^_^;