for The Deevolution Beam11/17/2017 c3 Guest
The only reason Team Rocket still exists is because they didn't launch their entire organization into some scheme for Ash Ketchum to stumble into, unlike every other villain team in existence.
The only reason Team Rocket still exists is because they didn't launch their entire organization into some scheme for Ash Ketchum to stumble into, unlike every other villain team in existence.
6/1/2011 c1 
3caitou zzzzzz
I like this story! I have a story request if u take them. I would like too see Ashchu team up with the go-getters. Especially when it comes to Ash trying to help worlturtle. (probalby mispelled)
3caitou zzzzzzI like this story! I have a story request if u take them. I would like too see Ashchu team up with the go-getters. Especially when it comes to Ash trying to help worlturtle. (probalby mispelled)
2/5/2008 c7 19Songbird of the End
Finally! A regular Pokemon/Mystery Dungeon Crossover! Do I smell a sequel? X3
19Songbird of the EndFinally! A regular Pokemon/Mystery Dungeon Crossover! Do I smell a sequel? X3
3/30/2007 c7 3Master Xanat
Nice story! I liked the plot and idea of the rescue teams visiting the "Main Land." I am currently writing a similar story...weird. I do have a bit of advice though, try proof reading your chapters in the sequel. I found a ton of spelling errors that could have been avoided by proof reading. I can't wait untill the sequel! This story deserves to be on my favoites list!
3Master XanatNice story! I liked the plot and idea of the rescue teams visiting the "Main Land." I am currently writing a similar story...weird. I do have a bit of advice though, try proof reading your chapters in the sequel. I found a ton of spelling errors that could have been avoided by proof reading. I can't wait untill the sequel! This story deserves to be on my favoites list!
11/1/2006 c7 16The Delphox Of Delphi
Very good fic. It was interesting and put an interesting twist on things. Personally thought it was a little short myself...but still i'm adding this to my favourites list.
16The Delphox Of DelphiVery good fic. It was interesting and put an interesting twist on things. Personally thought it was a little short myself...but still i'm adding this to my favourites list.
10/28/2006 c6 R'N'Rer
Good chapter with a few minor but amusing errors like ' center of gravy' and 'thinkest jactet'
Good chapter with a few minor but amusing errors like ' center of gravy' and 'thinkest jactet'
10/28/2006 c6 11dragonflysky
Great chapters! They were good and up so quickly. Your a very talented writer. This is an excellent story idea^_^
11dragonflyskyGreat chapters! They were good and up so quickly. Your a very talented writer. This is an excellent story idea^_^
10/16/2006 c3 11Sahxyel
Hmm, that was supremely interesting. Yes. What really got me for a second was that Wartortle could speak human after FOUR years. Amazing! Or just a leftover from his human life that he had, which made it luck to still say at least! ^-^
Poor Butch. XP I seriously laughed out loud when I read that. The dude needs to lighten up sometimes. XP Hehehe...
11SahxyelHmm, that was supremely interesting. Yes. What really got me for a second was that Wartortle could speak human after FOUR years. Amazing! Or just a leftover from his human life that he had, which made it luck to still say at least! ^-^
Poor Butch. XP I seriously laughed out loud when I read that. The dude needs to lighten up sometimes. XP Hehehe...
10/15/2006 c3 11dragonflysky
That was a good chapter...keep it up. I'm interested to see what happens next...But don't make it too predictable;)
11dragonflyskyThat was a good chapter...keep it up. I'm interested to see what happens next...But don't make it too predictable;)
10/13/2006 c1 Phadin
Hey, this is good, and original. Don't worry about if the Mystery Dungeon is supposed to be another world or not. If it makes a better story this way (and I think it does), then ignore it. Keep with what you have, and I look forward to more.
Hey, this is good, and original. Don't worry about if the Mystery Dungeon is supposed to be another world or not. If it makes a better story this way (and I think it does), then ignore it. Keep with what you have, and I look forward to more.
10/5/2006 c2 11Sahxyel
Hmm, some few spelling errors but that's all I caught.
The plot again is intesifying well, it's already original and the interest is growing too. Meganium is related to Ash's Bayleef? Hmm.
Uhh, I dunno if it's important or not, but in the mysterious dungeon game, the place that the character ends up on is actually a total WORLD of pokemon. Not Earth. *nods* Took me a while to understand it but I guess that's what it is. *plays as Skitty*
Well, besides that, it still is a good read, and I cannot wait to read more! ^-^
11SahxyelHmm, some few spelling errors but that's all I caught.
The plot again is intesifying well, it's already original and the interest is growing too. Meganium is related to Ash's Bayleef? Hmm.
Uhh, I dunno if it's important or not, but in the mysterious dungeon game, the place that the character ends up on is actually a total WORLD of pokemon. Not Earth. *nods* Took me a while to understand it but I guess that's what it is. *plays as Skitty*
Well, besides that, it still is a good read, and I cannot wait to read more! ^-^