for A Promise Broken12/20/2015 c1 Guest
Too sad...
Too sad...
4/4/2012 c1 
2MarshMallow14
Great fanfiction but I didn't expect that ending *tears falling down to my keyboard*. I love Howl and he died!
2MarshMallow14Great fanfiction but I didn't expect that ending *tears falling down to my keyboard*. I love Howl and he died!
9/30/2010 c1 1152178291268291
Well that was a buzz kill. The sad thing is that I didn't even see it coming. I actually really like it though. A bit choppy, you could have added more into the middle but I actually like it. Having a kid was a bit much but I liked how the choppiness sort of reflected the mood. I know this is confusing, just trying to make sense of what I think:)
Well that was a buzz kill. The sad thing is that I didn't even see it coming. I actually really like it though. A bit choppy, you could have added more into the middle but I actually like it. Having a kid was a bit much but I liked how the choppiness sort of reflected the mood. I know this is confusing, just trying to make sense of what I think:)
1/27/2009 c1 9AvengingMyInnocence
Wow, this is really sad. I love it!
Have you ever thought about revising it? If you have, I'd be glad to help, you could actually make a really nice multi chaptered fanfic out of this!
9AvengingMyInnocenceWow, this is really sad. I love it!
Have you ever thought about revising it? If you have, I'd be glad to help, you could actually make a really nice multi chaptered fanfic out of this!
7/9/2007 c1 pebbleinthesun
AH!
YOU KILLED HOWL!
(rants and tears out hair for a few hours)
Ok, now that I'm calmer, I can say, "Great story!"
I can also say,"A bit choppy" like everyone else!
Keep writing, this is very nice!
Now, if I can be left alone for a bit...
(goes back into hysterics at howls death)
AH!
YOU KILLED HOWL!
(rants and tears out hair for a few hours)
Ok, now that I'm calmer, I can say, "Great story!"
I can also say,"A bit choppy" like everyone else!
Keep writing, this is very nice!
Now, if I can be left alone for a bit...
(goes back into hysterics at howls death)
7/5/2007 c1 13chattingchick1
I actually liked your story. Like others have said, a little choppy, but other than that, it was good. I may be the first to say this, but I loved how the last scene was just the dialogue - except for the third to the last sentence. It gave it more of a sense that Sophie, Hoshi, and Calcifer's(Atleast I envision the second to the last line to be him) faces are not being shown, you can just hear the voices. Just that makes you feel like it's a sad memory.
13chattingchick1I actually liked your story. Like others have said, a little choppy, but other than that, it was good. I may be the first to say this, but I loved how the last scene was just the dialogue - except for the third to the last sentence. It gave it more of a sense that Sophie, Hoshi, and Calcifer's(Atleast I envision the second to the last line to be him) faces are not being shown, you can just hear the voices. Just that makes you feel like it's a sad memory.
2/14/2007 c1 KurenaiYuuki
i loved it poor sophie. great now i have to create a story for the c2 thing now two on top of my anime hot guy dual story and my oban story oh well i'll just add my soon to be howl story to the list of 15 others that i have started and that are sitting in ms word gathering virtual dust. atleast this one i will actually start and work on hopefully (lets out a big sigh)
i loved it poor sophie. great now i have to create a story for the c2 thing now two on top of my anime hot guy dual story and my oban story oh well i'll just add my soon to be howl story to the list of 15 others that i have started and that are sitting in ms word gathering virtual dust. atleast this one i will actually start and work on hopefully (lets out a big sigh)
12/30/2006 c1 4raspberrysorbet
:(
I'm DEPRESSED! T_T sobs! How could you KILL OFF HOWL? T_T
I KNOW! This is a BRILLIANT plot for a sequel! You can have a REUNION! THIS IS NOT THE END! I HAVE HOPE!
4raspberrysorbet:(
I'm DEPRESSED! T_T sobs! How could you KILL OFF HOWL? T_T
I KNOW! This is a BRILLIANT plot for a sequel! You can have a REUNION! THIS IS NOT THE END! I HAVE HOPE!
12/28/2006 c1 LoSK
:( Great. Now I'm depressed. But it was still good.
:( Great. Now I'm depressed. But it was still good.
11/3/2006 c1 62prettyinpinkgal
*sniffs* That's so sad...*gets angry* I can't believe you KILLED OFF HOWL! lol just kidding! But it's sad. u.u But very good! I like it. It's short and bittersweet. Nice job! ^^
62prettyinpinkgal*sniffs* That's so sad...*gets angry* I can't believe you KILLED OFF HOWL! lol just kidding! But it's sad. u.u But very good! I like it. It's short and bittersweet. Nice job! ^^