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9/26/2006 c1 kathy-lee hirsh
To be honest,I didn't like it.When you read it,it sounds really stupid, like you are trying too hard to make a poem,to make everything fit like a puzzle piece. The sentences were so random! Sorry but it sucked.
9/26/2006 c1 16218lzytwner
Hey spankx for teh shout out! :) Good story, I always did feel bad about Angela losing Kirk but now that she has Hodgey life will be all good. ;)

Brainiak
9/26/2006 c1 14Raven-Rain
Very sad and touching.

I think everyone's felt that way at least once.

Very nice :)
9/26/2006 c1 42willowwood
Nice little piece
9/25/2006 c1 126AJeff
It's sad and beautiful at the same time. Well done!
9/25/2006 c1 fireflower
Cute poem...very creative...;)

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