12/26/2009 c5 Mic
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1/2/2009 c5 Shubhs
the story's awesome dude!btw happy belated new year and hope u recover frm ur bad mood!
the story's awesome dude!btw happy belated new year and hope u recover frm ur bad mood!
10/28/2007 c5 1OooO.AngelicChaos.OooO
...i find it odd how i have fire days and people like you who liv out in the country (i mean No offence) hav snow days!...lol...but love the story!
...i find it odd how i have fire days and people like you who liv out in the country (i mean No offence) hav snow days!...lol...but love the story!
7/27/2007 c5 20MindIIBody
I simple love this story. Please continue again soon. Although I find Kyo's attitude is somewhat lacking in it's aggressiveness, I think it's better than the other stories I've read. Hahahhaa...
I simple love this story. Please continue again soon. Although I find Kyo's attitude is somewhat lacking in it's aggressiveness, I think it's better than the other stories I've read. Hahahhaa...
5/5/2007 c5 24moonlit reveries
The plot is so cool. A bit OOCness in Yuya's side. The story is cool! Update it! ASAP!
The plot is so cool. A bit OOCness in Yuya's side. The story is cool! Update it! ASAP!
5/5/2007 c2 moonlit reveries
The chapter was not bad! In fact, it was so cute! I just love Kyo so much!
The chapter was not bad! In fact, it was so cute! I just love Kyo so much!
4/18/2007 c5 3Miko-Chi
okay...i get the part bout kyo and yuya but i dont get the weird guy...i got confused sometimes like who is the servant and master and is there 2 servants? one male and female? try making it clearler when you're talking about someone which you have not explained the names yet.
okay...i get the part bout kyo and yuya but i dont get the weird guy...i got confused sometimes like who is the servant and master and is there 2 servants? one male and female? try making it clearler when you're talking about someone which you have not explained the names yet.
4/2/2007 c2 11Jaddasroots
When it said for his sake, I thought you meant for his sake'. LOL. I thought why for his sake? Anyway good story.
When it said for his sake, I thought you meant for his sake'. LOL. I thought why for his sake? Anyway good story.
3/8/2007 c5 2embargo
i can forgive a little crappy-ness when there's a good story line. you should finish. Please? i like the story...
i can forgive a little crappy-ness when there's a good story line. you should finish. Please? i like the story...
3/4/2007 c5 Crimson 2006
Wow! Did I ever tell you that your an awesome writer. This story totally kicks ass. Stop beating yourself up. I love the style that you write, and the story had such depth. As far as spelling a stuff goes, there were a few things, but hey it doesn't matter. Nobody's perfect ne? I hate to think about all the mistakes in my stories and I have a BETA lol!
Well, I hope that you can update soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. And if you'd like I can BETA this for you. I mean, if you want me too. And if not, then that's ok too!
Talk to you later!
Crimson2006
Wow! Did I ever tell you that your an awesome writer. This story totally kicks ass. Stop beating yourself up. I love the style that you write, and the story had such depth. As far as spelling a stuff goes, there were a few things, but hey it doesn't matter. Nobody's perfect ne? I hate to think about all the mistakes in my stories and I have a BETA lol!
Well, I hope that you can update soon. I'm looking forward to reading more. And if you'd like I can BETA this for you. I mean, if you want me too. And if not, then that's ok too!
Talk to you later!
Crimson2006