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2/18/2009 c11 6xxxNam-niCxxx
Ha HA! I like the part where donald gose coco
2/18/2009 c10 xxxNam-niCxxx
i MUST SAY YOU PUT A PERFECT AMOUNT OF ADVENTURE AND FANTASY IN THIS STORY THE FIRST TEN CHAPTERS ARE PERFECT.
2/18/2009 c9 xxxNam-niCxxx
No chapter Nine is! CHAPTER NINE!
2/18/2009 c8 xxxNam-niCxxx
I think chapter eight is my favorite.

Dont know why, just is
2/18/2009 c7 xxxNam-niCxxx
like the first one so small, yet so drawn to it.
2/18/2009 c6 xxxNam-niCxxx
This chapter is confusing, but in a good way. I like confusing:)
2/18/2009 c5 xxxNam-niCxxx
i LOVE Veronica.

She reminds me of a kingdom hearts character, but I cant remember who it was...

Anyways, this chapter is AWSOME!:)
2/18/2009 c4 xxxNam-niCxxx
Okay now good dose not cut it. It's GREAT!
2/18/2009 c3 xxxNam-niCxxx
TO GOOD FOR WORDS!
2/18/2009 c2 xxxNam-niCxxx
oh my god this chapter is so good!
2/18/2009 c1 xxxNam-niCxxx
strange it's so small...bt i cant look away. i like it.
4/10/2008 c45 Solarn
The entire fic is horribly childish, the Sues are annoying, hell, the entire cast is annoying, the only halfway likeable character is Veronica and she's supposed to be the antagonist. Seriously, stop writing until you mature a bit.
7/13/2007 c2 1blue mars
I've only read a few chapters, but I'm very interested!
2/6/2007 c1 6Anthrax Pretzels
Hmm, let's see...

All your characters are sues, and you've centered the story so much around them that it's not even vaguely relevant to KH anymore. Heck, Sora's not even like mentioned anymore.

You need a beta. Seriously. The plot's going nowhere even with the sheer amount of chapters put in... D:

Readers prefer quality over quantity any day
1/27/2007 c2 1Friendlyfangirl
Take a break from updating so fast!People will get more into it

if they see it's not going to fast!LOL, great chapter!

-write on
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