
2/13/2008 c1
12Forestwater
it's a little confusing, but pretty good. well-written, and - i think - in character. i'm not really sure because i can't picture him in this kind of situation.
i personally disagree with you on the creepy and overrated part . . . many people don't like yuki.
but anyway, the centered thing is kind of annoying, and some grammar is off, but it's really very interesting to read.

it's a little confusing, but pretty good. well-written, and - i think - in character. i'm not really sure because i can't picture him in this kind of situation.
i personally disagree with you on the creepy and overrated part . . . many people don't like yuki.
but anyway, the centered thing is kind of annoying, and some grammar is off, but it's really very interesting to read.
12/11/2006 c1
9Bloody Sword Alchemist
I love this story! it is kinda fun to make Yuki a victim of anything. yes, Yuki is very cool so why do you find him creepy?what is wrong with you?
Anyway, cool story. i liked it. a little confusing, but still really good.

I love this story! it is kinda fun to make Yuki a victim of anything. yes, Yuki is very cool so why do you find him creepy?what is wrong with you?
Anyway, cool story. i liked it. a little confusing, but still really good.