for The First Digidestened: Life8/17/2007 c15 7DCD
Why am I not surprised? I knew this would happen at some point! Well, anyways, good luck!
Why am I not surprised? I knew this would happen at some point! Well, anyways, good luck!
7/24/2007 c14 Tokyo Oranges
ehe why does the end of this chapter remind me of the fight between Angewomon & ladydevimon in Adventure 01
ehe why does the end of this chapter remind me of the fight between Angewomon & ladydevimon in Adventure 01
5/26/2007 c14 7DCD
That's too short of a chapter!
I hope you will update more during the summer break! please!
~Tae
That's too short of a chapter!
I hope you will update more during the summer break! please!
~Tae
5/26/2007 c14 TestAccount2401
The digimon analyzer bit bored me, to be honest.
I'd make another comment about real crests, but there are infinite possibilities, so... whatever.
Please update soon.
The digimon analyzer bit bored me, to be honest.
I'd make another comment about real crests, but there are infinite possibilities, so... whatever.
Please update soon.
5/17/2007 c2 
16Zokolov
Plenty of dialogue, most of it well written, but the formatting could have been done better.
I liked that you used Gennai in this. However, the Digimon in this one are certainly not the ones in Adventure. As you know, the Digimon in Adventure were created a bit after Taichi and Hikari saw Greymon and Parrotmon in the Real World. That is, if you saw Episode 45 and understood it...
Anyway, the plot itself looks interesting, and I certainly hope it would thicken more.
16ZokolovPlenty of dialogue, most of it well written, but the formatting could have been done better.
I liked that you used Gennai in this. However, the Digimon in this one are certainly not the ones in Adventure. As you know, the Digimon in Adventure were created a bit after Taichi and Hikari saw Greymon and Parrotmon in the Real World. That is, if you saw Episode 45 and understood it...
Anyway, the plot itself looks interesting, and I certainly hope it would thicken more.
5/17/2007 c1 Zokolov
Ah, so this is about the original Digidestined...The beginning is too short to captivate the readers interest.
Ah, so this is about the original Digidestined...The beginning is too short to captivate the readers interest.
5/16/2007 c13 EvilBoyzR2Cute
-_-" I'm a bit confused about who blackgatomon is...
Anyways, keep up the awesome work, love to read more from a fellow digimon fan^^
-_-" I'm a bit confused about who blackgatomon is...
Anyways, keep up the awesome work, love to read more from a fellow digimon fan^^
5/12/2007 c13 TestAccount2401
I think I've said this before, but: I'm confused.
So, nothing new, then.
Please update soon! (I'll try to start posting again within the next few weeks. It's just that AP exams are now, so... yeah.)
I think I've said this before, but: I'm confused.
So, nothing new, then.
Please update soon! (I'll try to start posting again within the next few weeks. It's just that AP exams are now, so... yeah.)
4/10/2007 c12 TestAccount2401
Research? What research?
Good chapter, though. Bit short, but still good.
Please update soon!
Research? What research?
Good chapter, though. Bit short, but still good.
Please update soon!
4/10/2007 c12 7DCD
Wow...Hey it's me again...And I read your story...
It's really great! But I could use longer chapters...Or faster updates...
Wow...Hey it's me again...And I read your story...
It's really great! But I could use longer chapters...Or faster updates...