for Serpent Rose3/21/2014 c7 
17SofiaDragon
Still interesting. You may want to fix the first two chapters, as they are identical. Super power dark Harry has quite the network going.
17SofiaDragonStill interesting. You may want to fix the first two chapters, as they are identical. Super power dark Harry has quite the network going.
9/15/2007 c5 asdfjkl
the story line itself seems really really good,i just have a very hard time following it. your writing is too unclear and most of your diction is unncessary. simple is better, your trying to hard.
update soon!
the story line itself seems really really good,i just have a very hard time following it. your writing is too unclear and most of your diction is unncessary. simple is better, your trying to hard.
update soon!
3/10/2007 c4 1drakedragon1
i like it, my only question is did when did ginny and harry bond. since her eye's flashed like the other two i's guessing she is bonded to him and what does being bonded allow them to do. thank you. Keep up the good work.
1drakedragon1i like it, my only question is did when did ginny and harry bond. since her eye's flashed like the other two i's guessing she is bonded to him and what does being bonded allow them to do. thank you. Keep up the good work.
3/9/2007 c3 Under Revision
Good start! This is written much better than the person who either stole your chapter or you stole hers... ^^ Either way, it's good! Keep writing it and update soon!
Good start! This is written much better than the person who either stole your chapter or you stole hers... ^^ Either way, it's good! Keep writing it and update soon!
3/5/2007 c3 Lorna
This story is great so far please continue
This story is great so far please continue