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3/2/2007 c25 9Sammy Elle
This was a VERY,VERY GREAT story!
2/24/2007 c24 Sammy Elle
Great chapter!I´m happy about your update and even more about the fact that Sam is beginning to recover!
2/23/2007 c23 Sammy Elle
I LOVE this fanfic!It´s something diffrent than all other storys!I hope you will update soon!
2/16/2007 c23 27marialisa
Ooh, I want to know what Danny's worked out about Stanzister.

Good chapter, looking forward to the next!
2/15/2007 c23 7RRSherlock
I don't think I would ever say this, but I hope Jack gets what's coming to him!
2/15/2007 c23 hotchner
That was a MAGNIFICIENT Chapter. I just don't know how much

more of this I'm going to be able to take. Having Jack as

going to jail is something that I don't know if I'm going

to be able to handle. Having Sam,Martin,and Danny trying to

put him away is pretty good though. I hope that they get him

for what he did to Sam, but I wish they didn't have to be so

mean to Jack. Keep up the Fantastic Writing. Can't wait to

see what you have got up there sleeve.
2/14/2007 c22 27marialisa
Poor Sam...looking forward to finding out how she handle's the trial!
2/12/2007 c21 marialisa
You're certainly packing in a lot of emotions to this story. I'll be interested to see how Sam deals with her ordeal and how Martin helps her through it.
2/11/2007 c20 2IloveHouseBonesandCsiMiami
Good job with this story. I like it.
2/5/2007 c19 7RRSherlock
Really? Sam would feel better being rescued than escaping? Well, I guess since that's how I wrote it too... No, really, I'm hooked.

My only suggestion is using * or = or somthing to separate the scenes. Sometimes I get confused between Martin or Sam or Viv...well, you get the point!

Keep writing! It's fantastic!
2/5/2007 c19 hotchner
I can't believe that you did that to Jack. Jack has always

been my favorite out of all the characters. Anthony has always

been my favorite actor of all times. I have followed him ever

since he came to America to act and you go off and give him

a raw deal by making him a bad guy. Please don't do that again.

Even though you made Jack the bad guy, I still think that this

is the most AWESOME Story that I have read in a while. You put

all the other Characters right in the right character. I am

glad that Sam and Martin might get together. Keep up the

Awesome Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.
1/29/2007 c3 1englishpetal
This is a great AU fic! I'll be reading more of it very soon. Nice work!
1/27/2007 c17 Hannah100
Great story...can't wait for the next chapter.
1/18/2007 c16 2starbrite4584b
I love it! Please update soon! :o)
1/9/2007 c16 7RRSherlock
This is great! Please keep the chapters coming!
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