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8/3/2007 c1 5kitty8101
Wow, can't wait to read the next chap, write more soon!
11/19/2006 c1 6Xrissoula
Who, man, I totaly forgot about the word MOFO, wow, that was hilarious.And great chapter by the way.
10/9/2006 c1 7Angel Marie Winchester
must read more must read more twitch twitch sorry omg i loved it i hope you ad more soon i really want to read see ya
10/9/2006 c1 8Psychoticmonkey
YOU BUTTMUNCH! I WAS GOI NG TO POST THIS STORY! I...YOU...AH!YOU ARE SO EVIL!I AM SO MAD!
10/9/2006 c1 15black hurricane
I like it. UPDATE...continue...if not...

(dark: i'll give you a visit *insert death glare with black hell fire behind*)

(nice: Me too...gr *not frighteningly at all*)

(dark: *rolls eyes* pathetic)

(nice: hey i can throash your ass.)

(ark: what ever...*walks away into dark depths of mind*)

(nice: COME BACK ASSHOLE! I'M NOT DONE WITH YOU *runs after dark*)

they actually left :|. Wow. Any way. Please update. Crap. I still have to write, I'm not going to get it finished *sigh* aw well. Be careful of grammar and don't rust the story. On the whole I LOVE IT. UPDATE!...Thanks. :P BH
10/8/2006 c1 13Don'tKillKenny
its a good story, but ur rushing 2 much into it and watch ur spelling and grammar (how i hate them both!),its hard, i kno, ur doing great so far dont worry bout that. anyways, update soon!
10/8/2006 c1 8Lyn Dulce
I like the idea, but you seem to be rushing through the plot, and there are a lot of spelling mistakes. Overall it's pretty good though.

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