for Red Phantom10/5/2009 c3 
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Sam & Tucker should tell Valerie about Vlad. After all Danny might not be able to tell, but that doesn't mean his friends or sister can't.
Jack, Maddie, Damon (Valerie's dad), & Lancer should find out Danny's secret.
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Sam & Tucker should tell Valerie about Vlad. After all Danny might not be able to tell, but that doesn't mean his friends or sister can't.
Jack, Maddie, Damon (Valerie's dad), & Lancer should find out Danny's secret.
10/10/2006 c1 2Fantasma101
remember to start a new paragraph for every direct quote or when ever a character talks. Good ideas but needs setting and a good editing. But otherwise it's really good. Keep going!
2Fantasma101remember to start a new paragraph for every direct quote or when ever a character talks. Good ideas but needs setting and a good editing. But otherwise it's really good. Keep going!
10/9/2006 c1 17Butterflywing
I like this... you should write another chapter, but I think it's a little choppy. Other than that, it's a good plot, and the characters are in character.
17ButterflywingI like this... you should write another chapter, but I think it's a little choppy. Other than that, it's a good plot, and the characters are in character.