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3/29/2008 c2 mythicalprogrammer
Oh man OCC everywhere. I guess I'm fine with it. Made Nodoka and Akane pretty evil. Overall I can't say much since I don't really see much going on. But I love the cute ware child.
Oh man OCC everywhere. I guess I'm fine with it. Made Nodoka and Akane pretty evil. Overall I can't say much since I don't really see much going on. But I love the cute ware child.
3/23/2008 c1 
31Sakura Lisel
So what happened to the REAL Ranma after Nodako abandoned him in the hospital, and took the Inverses Ranma? Did the real Saotome Ranma finally die, or did he recover and get sent to an orphanage after no one came to claim him?
31Sakura LiselSo what happened to the REAL Ranma after Nodako abandoned him in the hospital, and took the Inverses Ranma? Did the real Saotome Ranma finally die, or did he recover and get sent to an orphanage after no one came to claim him?
3/22/2008 c2 Chichiri MonkMask
um confused on one part at the start of this chapter Ranko was there then at the end your calling her Lina. My question is why?
um confused on one part at the start of this chapter Ranko was there then at the end your calling her Lina. My question is why?
3/21/2008 c2 2Vilkath
To much information, to much chaos just simply to much without any sort of base to stand on. You threw out tons of new characters, OOC characters, abilities and such out of no where without really giving any foundation to explain it.
If you were simply shooting for a bad wedding so Ranma would leave you didn't have to do half of what you did, over all I don't think a single character here acted like themself, and with no valid backstory to explain the changes it's like a whole new story with just some other characters names.
2VilkathTo much information, to much chaos just simply to much without any sort of base to stand on. You threw out tons of new characters, OOC characters, abilities and such out of no where without really giving any foundation to explain it.
If you were simply shooting for a bad wedding so Ranma would leave you didn't have to do half of what you did, over all I don't think a single character here acted like themself, and with no valid backstory to explain the changes it's like a whole new story with just some other characters names.
5/15/2007 c1 2Vilkath
Not a bad idea.. I kind like your more evil Nodoka kiling nurse's and willing to kill and kidnap babies. usualy that sort of thing is left to Genma and she just looks the other way. Not entirely sure why you felt you had to make 3 babies, be intersting see how Ranko fits in with the normal long lost brother/sister bit. Not to mention poor Brittany, I mean come on first stolen from her birth mother, then were-chetah clan killed off and she adopted by the diggers. More or less going to three families hehe. Not really much written yet, and it's been a little while since you've updated so there isn't really much to go on. Still this seems like a fair idea if you continue it.
2VilkathNot a bad idea.. I kind like your more evil Nodoka kiling nurse's and willing to kill and kidnap babies. usualy that sort of thing is left to Genma and she just looks the other way. Not entirely sure why you felt you had to make 3 babies, be intersting see how Ranko fits in with the normal long lost brother/sister bit. Not to mention poor Brittany, I mean come on first stolen from her birth mother, then were-chetah clan killed off and she adopted by the diggers. More or less going to three families hehe. Not really much written yet, and it's been a little while since you've updated so there isn't really much to go on. Still this seems like a fair idea if you continue it.
10/12/2006 c1 Nysk
Excellent start I hope you will continue
Excellent start I hope you will continue
10/12/2006 c1 Guest
interesting opining you have.
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interesting opining you have.
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