8/18/2007 c1 Ani-Ca
umm i don't think the problem was that ed couldn't swim i think he knew how to before but he can't swim for the fact that his automail would wiegh him down wouldn't it? i don't think its possible for him or anyone to float with a metal arm and leg or maybe thats just me? but i really don't think hes afraid of water because there was one episode where they were on the island and he was about to go but he remember he couldn't,so i still think it beacuse of his arm and leg because people should know and remember they can't swim, but with him it like he forgot that he can't anymore due to his arm and leg... well that my opinion but other then that your story was interesting.

7/7/2007 c1 Victoria
yeh a little cheesey in some bits but hey i can get really bored with a story easily so if you can right an interesting peice for me that would mean that ur a really talented wrighter with a great imagination. However your story fell just below my interest but then again i am only satisfied with topnotch work or in other words i am one tough nut to crack so satisfieing me with a story is like trying to teach Ed manners but dont let this get you down keep wrighting stories and ill kepp reviewing them and who knows i just may grow to love your stories as i half do now. Well Done, Hard nut.

10/14/2006 c1 3Neko42
hahaha...

10/12/2006 c1 16triggerhappy.antagonist
Lol ^^

It would have been better if you had added more details, though...I mean about Roy and Ed learning to swim...