for Venomous Blossom2/16/2018 c2 
8multyfangirl21
Kiba! At least don't be peeping on mated/claimed demons, and wouldn't you like a unclaimed dog demoness to be peeping on?
8multyfangirl21Kiba! At least don't be peeping on mated/claimed demons, and wouldn't you like a unclaimed dog demoness to be peeping on?
11/4/2014 c4 Naruhina love 12
I hope you continue i like the story
I hope you continue i like the story
8/14/2008 c1 2Bob Pharrot
where to start?
okay, the concept is kind of cool but your spelling and your grammar, not so much and putting author notes in paranthesis like that during the story is kind of annoying
uchia should be uchiha, tunsade should be tsunade, stuff like that, and watch where you put your periods and be careful about whether or not you capitalize something
you also may have thought that you were being all suspenseful but honestly, you gave it away when you made him say 'she is my former teammate' and in your summary having snake demon choosing sakura for his mate and then listing sasusaku among the couples gave it away as well
its okay, but you might want to find a good beta to catch the spelling, typos and punctuation things
2Bob Pharrotwhere to start?
okay, the concept is kind of cool but your spelling and your grammar, not so much and putting author notes in paranthesis like that during the story is kind of annoying
uchia should be uchiha, tunsade should be tsunade, stuff like that, and watch where you put your periods and be careful about whether or not you capitalize something
you also may have thought that you were being all suspenseful but honestly, you gave it away when you made him say 'she is my former teammate' and in your summary having snake demon choosing sakura for his mate and then listing sasusaku among the couples gave it away as well
its okay, but you might want to find a good beta to catch the spelling, typos and punctuation things
4/4/2008 c3 1Lady Akaiza Luna
please update. I know this is kinda old but it's pure gold. please update soon!
1Lady Akaiza Lunaplease update. I know this is kinda old but it's pure gold. please update soon!
3/28/2007 c3 11overlordofnobodies
Not bad not bad at all. Cant wait to see ho next you trun into a demon . I like how trun kiba into a dog but not the girl part. Cant wait for the next chater.
11overlordofnobodiesNot bad not bad at all. Cant wait to see ho next you trun into a demon . I like how trun kiba into a dog but not the girl part. Cant wait for the next chater.
11/19/2006 c3 3Rakero-chan
It's Akatsuki. just for spelling.
HILARIOUS! loves it. please update soon.
3Rakero-chanIt's Akatsuki. just for spelling.
HILARIOUS! loves it. please update soon.