
11/27/2006 c5
16breadmakesyoufat
I wouldn't say to death, but...
Update soon! I really, really want Inoue to be able to talk to Isida soon! I mean, this is THEIR story, right? Please update soon, that'll help keep people interested if your scared of losing their attention :)
MelanieStar

I wouldn't say to death, but...
Update soon! I really, really want Inoue to be able to talk to Isida soon! I mean, this is THEIR story, right? Please update soon, that'll help keep people interested if your scared of losing their attention :)
MelanieStar
11/27/2006 c5 flona
great fiction
loved it , please update soon
love isida
great fiction
loved it , please update soon
love isida
11/20/2006 c4
2Bista
Great Chapter. Really captivating. One thing though: Ishida's mother was shown, but only once. She died when he was little. Nothing else is known. One question: Is it over? Your author's notes gave that hint, but now I ask you. Anway, great chapter!

Great Chapter. Really captivating. One thing though: Ishida's mother was shown, but only once. She died when he was little. Nothing else is known. One question: Is it over? Your author's notes gave that hint, but now I ask you. Anway, great chapter!
11/16/2006 c4
2cherrygirl6
VERY VERY VERY GOOD.
This story uses beautiful language
I love this fanfic

VERY VERY VERY GOOD.
This story uses beautiful language
I love this fanfic
11/15/2006 c4
22KittiKat626
Poor brain. *Pats brain and hands you a bandaid*
Anyway, I really like this! *Throws update party* Took you a while, but it was worth the wait! Yay! I love the part with Ichigo and Rukia and the sugar. :) Reminds me of a new show I caught a few EPs after is started. The main character guy likes 13 spoonfulls of sugar in his tea ... or coffee ... or whatever it is he drinks. :p
Yeah. As a last note - I LOVE THIS!
~KittiKat

Poor brain. *Pats brain and hands you a bandaid*
Anyway, I really like this! *Throws update party* Took you a while, but it was worth the wait! Yay! I love the part with Ichigo and Rukia and the sugar. :) Reminds me of a new show I caught a few EPs after is started. The main character guy likes 13 spoonfulls of sugar in his tea ... or coffee ... or whatever it is he drinks. :p
Yeah. As a last note - I LOVE THIS!
~KittiKat
11/13/2006 c3 KittiKat626
Hope Ishida's OK. If not, I will steal him back from you and hide him in my closet. :D
Anywho, I think Orihime was IC (Though a little different than usual) and I liked this.
I hope that you make a new chapter soon. (Holds up hammer over author's head with evil glint in her eyes) Update!
~KittiKat
Hope Ishida's OK. If not, I will steal him back from you and hide him in my closet. :D
Anywho, I think Orihime was IC (Though a little different than usual) and I liked this.
I hope that you make a new chapter soon. (Holds up hammer over author's head with evil glint in her eyes) Update!
~KittiKat
11/13/2006 c2 KittiKat626
Hi! Sorry for not reviewing lately! I've been spending all my time writing and not reviewing. :D
Anyway, I really like this and really hope you update really soon!
Really! :P
~KittiKat
Hi! Sorry for not reviewing lately! I've been spending all my time writing and not reviewing. :D
Anyway, I really like this and really hope you update really soon!
Really! :P
~KittiKat
11/7/2006 c3
1CrystalRaindrop007
I love how your characters are done. You do them so well, keeping them IC, while putting them in situations that they have never been in before, so their reactions are completely up in the air, but this is what I imagine them really doing.
I like how Ishida's father is put into this, too. And I hate Mayuri! And you make me hate him more, so there. :P
Anyway, good story and I hope you update soon! *Pokes until author kicks her*
Ouch . . .
—Kit.Kat

I love how your characters are done. You do them so well, keeping them IC, while putting them in situations that they have never been in before, so their reactions are completely up in the air, but this is what I imagine them really doing.
I like how Ishida's father is put into this, too. And I hate Mayuri! And you make me hate him more, so there. :P
Anyway, good story and I hope you update soon! *Pokes until author kicks her*
Ouch . . .
—Kit.Kat
11/7/2006 c3 flona
loved it please keep going
boor isida
boor orihime
loved it please keep going
boor isida
boor orihime
11/5/2006 c1 raspberry
normally, i wouldnt be reading anime fanfics. but hey... who could say no to BLEACH..?
i lurve the fic already...
and i think ishida is shmeksie...
hahaha
lol.
keep rocking!
normally, i wouldnt be reading anime fanfics. but hey... who could say no to BLEACH..?
i lurve the fic already...
and i think ishida is shmeksie...
hahaha
lol.
keep rocking!
10/31/2006 c3 NYC
Good graciouss. I love please continue.
Good graciouss. I love please continue.
10/31/2006 c3
2Bista
I really should have reviewed when I read this the first time, now why was it I didn't? *shrugs* oh well. I like your plot here, and Inoue seems as she would if this were truely happening in the manga; an excellent writing skill of yours it seems. Keep up the good work!

I really should have reviewed when I read this the first time, now why was it I didn't? *shrugs* oh well. I like your plot here, and Inoue seems as she would if this were truely happening in the manga; an excellent writing skill of yours it seems. Keep up the good work!
10/31/2006 c2 reader
cliffhanger? d'oh!
by the way, your stories aren't "silly", hah. ^_^
cliffhanger? d'oh!
by the way, your stories aren't "silly", hah. ^_^