for The Heart Gathers the Scattered Pieces reference3/14/2009 c39 
41Authoressinhiding
I'M BACK!
I have been away for ages...
but now I finally spent an hour and got all caught up.
The story pwns. I'm sad that there are only a few chapters left, but look forward to reading the rest of them.
Congrats on finding your pirate necklace again!
AiH
41AuthoressinhidingI'M BACK!
I have been away for ages...
but now I finally spent an hour and got all caught up.
The story pwns. I'm sad that there are only a few chapters left, but look forward to reading the rest of them.
Congrats on finding your pirate necklace again!
AiH
2/22/2009 c39 1Little Miss Sparrow
! Anger = dragon: brilliant. And the whole thing with grief, which turns into anger. Just...yes. And a pangolin! So cute and sad all curled up into a ball!
So, I'm awfully curious about what happens next. Up to this point it's been "go find the next manifestation!" but now I'm looking forward to whatever the big finish is gonna be. =3
And now, we interrupt this review for something rather pointless...
Firstly, thankyouthankyou. I'm completely obsessed with Doctor Who now and it's all your fault. xD I
1Little Miss Sparrow! Anger = dragon: brilliant. And the whole thing with grief, which turns into anger. Just...yes. And a pangolin! So cute and sad all curled up into a ball!
So, I'm awfully curious about what happens next. Up to this point it's been "go find the next manifestation!" but now I'm looking forward to whatever the big finish is gonna be. =3
And now, we interrupt this review for something rather pointless...
Firstly, thankyouthankyou. I'm completely obsessed with Doctor Who now and it's all your fault. xD I
1/27/2009 c38 Little Miss Sparrow
Aw, I love the idea of all the different horse creatures! ^^ Especially the "horseflies"; they make me think of Spy Kids 2. xD Once again, I lovelovelove this world.
Aw, I love the idea of all the different horse creatures! ^^ Especially the "horseflies"; they make me think of Spy Kids 2. xD Once again, I lovelovelove this world.
1/25/2009 c38 Spoarrowlover
You should have seen my face when I saw there was another chapter! I'm so happy! YEAH! Update soon!
You should have seen my face when I saw there was another chapter! I'm so happy! YEAH! Update soon!
1/12/2009 c37 Little Miss Sparrow
Oh man. xD That Pirate Rap is priceless.
Teddy seems to be adjusting quite well to the whole magic thing, eh? x3 I s'pose he'd better, though; there's hardly enough time to explain everything to him.
Okay. I LOVELOVELOVE the idea of this Realm they're in now. Well, maybe not as an actual place, but as a story idea? Awesome. I'm in the same boat as Amy here - people really need to learn to respect nature for what it is, not disregard it because it's different.
Great chappie, as usual. Good work! ^^
Oh man. xD That Pirate Rap is priceless.
Teddy seems to be adjusting quite well to the whole magic thing, eh? x3 I s'pose he'd better, though; there's hardly enough time to explain everything to him.
Okay. I LOVELOVELOVE the idea of this Realm they're in now. Well, maybe not as an actual place, but as a story idea? Awesome. I'm in the same boat as Amy here - people really need to learn to respect nature for what it is, not disregard it because it's different.
Great chappie, as usual. Good work! ^^
1/12/2009 c36 Little Miss Sparrow
I liked it pretty well, actually. Only I sort of stopped after...three episodes. ^^; Kinda lost interest. So I really can't give you any feedback about the Doctor's character, 'specially since you're using the Tenth Doctor! Sorry. xD
Still a very good chapter, though. I'm a sucker for the !DRAMA!, and you pull it off very well. Keep it up! ;3
I liked it pretty well, actually. Only I sort of stopped after...three episodes. ^^; Kinda lost interest. So I really can't give you any feedback about the Doctor's character, 'specially since you're using the Tenth Doctor! Sorry. xD
Still a very good chapter, though. I'm a sucker for the !DRAMA!, and you pull it off very well. Keep it up! ;3
1/1/2009 c37 9Captain Rika Kisuktai
Psych? I LOVE that show! There was a marathon on the other day and I remembered how much I loved the show.
And now that my burst of random noting is done, threequel? Oh my. I can't wait. Where, oh where, could Sparrow's Anger be? Oh where, oh where could it be?
9Captain Rika KisuktaiPsych? I LOVE that show! There was a marathon on the other day and I remembered how much I loved the show.
And now that my burst of random noting is done, threequel? Oh my. I can't wait. Where, oh where, could Sparrow's Anger be? Oh where, oh where could it be?
12/4/2008 c36 Captain Rika Kisuktai
The Doctor was great! But this raises more questions...How did Mandel get a hold of the poison? Argh...
The Doctor was great! But this raises more questions...How did Mandel get a hold of the poison? Argh...
11/20/2008 c35 RespectTheSporks
i know i didn't say anything last time, but sory that i didn't reveiw! i've beevery busy with school lately.. we had a big senior paper due in englis, and it's been stealing up all my usual reading time!
anyway, greaat chappie! can't wait til the next
-holds breath-
i know i didn't say anything last time, but sory that i didn't reveiw! i've beevery busy with school lately.. we had a big senior paper due in englis, and it's been stealing up all my usual reading time!
anyway, greaat chappie! can't wait til the next
-holds breath-
11/19/2008 c34 RespectTheSporks
AH! -gasps for air- omg, i miss a couple of updates and you spring this on me! AH! (great chappie, though at one point you say that she "can rake care of her self" about a third of the way down when she is giving James reasons why she will be fine on her own with the captian.)
AH! -gasps for air- omg, i miss a couple of updates and you spring this on me! AH! (great chappie, though at one point you say that she "can rake care of her self" about a third of the way down when she is giving James reasons why she will be fine on her own with the captian.)
11/16/2008 c35 1Little Miss Sparrow
Oh, wow, there's an actual "Rewiew this Story/Chapter" button now. xD Okay, so...you've convinced me to go watch the first episode of Doctor Who after I've written this review. Because I hate not getting references, and because I can. So. Yeah. Ahem.
But more to the point...OMGJAMESNO! Which pretty much sums it up. Okay! Write more plz. =D
1Little Miss SparrowOh, wow, there's an actual "Rewiew this Story/Chapter" button now. xD Okay, so...you've convinced me to go watch the first episode of Doctor Who after I've written this review. Because I hate not getting references, and because I can. So. Yeah. Ahem.
But more to the point...OMGJAMESNO! Which pretty much sums it up. Okay! Write more plz. =D
11/14/2008 c35 9Captain Rika Kisuktai
O.O No way. *SQUE!* *boogies* The Doctor's going to pop up? This gets crazier and crazier!...Was Mandel and alien? ;D
9Captain Rika KisuktaiO.O No way. *SQUE!* *boogies* The Doctor's going to pop up? This gets crazier and crazier!...Was Mandel and alien? ;D
11/13/2008 c35 20ArmoredSoul
O.o
Which doctor would that be again?
...
OH.
THAT doctor.
Ok.
That's not good.
20ArmoredSoulO.o
Which doctor would that be again?
...
OH.
THAT doctor.
Ok.
That's not good.