for It Doesn't Matter8/25/2012 c1 Long Live BRUCAS
Very good
To bad he didn't realize Max doesn't care about the chair his legs
If she only knew about his thoughts.
Very good
To bad he didn't realize Max doesn't care about the chair his legs
If she only knew about his thoughts.
10/26/2006 c1 
25Mari83
I haven’t even reviewed this one and you already have a sequel up… Not that I’m complaining about your speed of writing:-)
Great to have some of Logan’s thoughts at this night, I totally can see him sitting at the window with this in his mind.
“I had it all planned out so it wouldn’t be messy with teary goodbyes… That’s before she kissed me… So much for that thought…”
Somehow seems very Logan, trying to make it easier for her.
“I would blow up at her because I resented her disrupting this perfect little bubble I built around myself.”
Great observation, this and the whole paragraph about Max changing Logan’s view on work and his life.
25Mari83I haven’t even reviewed this one and you already have a sequel up… Not that I’m complaining about your speed of writing:-)
Great to have some of Logan’s thoughts at this night, I totally can see him sitting at the window with this in his mind.
“I had it all planned out so it wouldn’t be messy with teary goodbyes… That’s before she kissed me… So much for that thought…”
Somehow seems very Logan, trying to make it easier for her.
“I would blow up at her because I resented her disrupting this perfect little bubble I built around myself.”
Great observation, this and the whole paragraph about Max changing Logan’s view on work and his life.
10/21/2006 c1 85shywr1ter
Beautifully done... and it's okay to have this angst, 'cos we know that it all workd out! ;}
The lyrics do seem to fit in these moments of BBWW. Your thoughts for Logan are just right, for what happened in that episode. Thanks for sharing!
85shywr1terBeautifully done... and it's okay to have this angst, 'cos we know that it all workd out! ;}
The lyrics do seem to fit in these moments of BBWW. Your thoughts for Logan are just right, for what happened in that episode. Thanks for sharing!
10/21/2006 c1 BlueBell
Please give us a Max companion piece. I really liked this little story and I've saved it to read again, and again.
Thanks
Please give us a Max companion piece. I really liked this little story and I've saved it to read again, and again.
Thanks
10/21/2006 c1 5homicidalslayer
I loved your fic. I have actually in the past paused BBWW on my computer's DVD player, opened iTunes, and listened to that EXACT song (which i pirated off of the Buffy the Vampire Slayer soundtrack). You should do a Max companion piece; you're good at this. Mad Props on the fic.
5homicidalslayerI loved your fic. I have actually in the past paused BBWW on my computer's DVD player, opened iTunes, and listened to that EXACT song (which i pirated off of the Buffy the Vampire Slayer soundtrack). You should do a Max companion piece; you're good at this. Mad Props on the fic.