for Unheard9/26/2014 c1 Guest
Now I feel terrible because I'm always doing outlaw missions and I almost never even look at the other board.
Now I feel terrible because I'm always doing outlaw missions and I almost never even look at the other board.
11/6/2013 c1 
41cresselia8themoon
I am so glad I read this... from now on I will not ignore another E-rank mission. Poor Kala.
41cresselia8themoonI am so glad I read this... from now on I will not ignore another E-rank mission. Poor Kala.
10/28/2013 c1 63FutureTrunksFan94
Awww...this was sad. I ALWAYS do the little missions too-I don't forget them. I'd hate to hurt my little Pokemon friends.
63FutureTrunksFan94Awww...this was sad. I ALWAYS do the little missions too-I don't forget them. I'd hate to hurt my little Pokemon friends.
9/28/2012 c1 Pelaene
This... is so... s-sad! ;n; Poor little thing... And while listening to a Chrono Cross OST compilation, the music player decided to play a sad song while I read this. That's what I call perfect timing.
And those rescue teams who didn't take the mission. CAN I KICK A SOCCER BALL TO THEIR FACES?
And that Zangoose. Not only a soccer ball, but also a throw off a cliff. Seriously.
I do E-Rank missions too, in Blue Rescue AND Explorers of Time. It just makes me feel sad to ignore those little guys who can't defend theirselves alone in a dungeon that means death to them.
Anyways, all-in-all, this was a beautiful story. ;u;
This... is so... s-sad! ;n; Poor little thing... And while listening to a Chrono Cross OST compilation, the music player decided to play a sad song while I read this. That's what I call perfect timing.
And those rescue teams who didn't take the mission. CAN I KICK A SOCCER BALL TO THEIR FACES?
And that Zangoose. Not only a soccer ball, but also a throw off a cliff. Seriously.
I do E-Rank missions too, in Blue Rescue AND Explorers of Time. It just makes me feel sad to ignore those little guys who can't defend theirselves alone in a dungeon that means death to them.
Anyways, all-in-all, this was a beautiful story. ;u;
8/5/2012 c1 2lxzulis
Now I feel bad for ignoring the tiny-tike missions. And I also dislike Zangoose even more. Anyway, this was very well written.
2lxzulisNow I feel bad for ignoring the tiny-tike missions. And I also dislike Zangoose even more. Anyway, this was very well written.
1/13/2012 c1 11Noip13
Believe it or not, I actually DO rescue these guys. I save 'em up, go to the tiny dungeon they're in, and do five of them at once.
Thank god they stop giving them to you once you level up ranks a little.
But this is kinda scary...
11Noip13Believe it or not, I actually DO rescue these guys. I save 'em up, go to the tiny dungeon they're in, and do five of them at once.
Thank god they stop giving them to you once you level up ranks a little.
But this is kinda scary...
10/27/2010 c1 Joe
you should have a chapter 2 that deals with the Zangoose being found out and lynched for it.
you should have a chapter 2 that deals with the Zangoose being found out and lynched for it.
8/4/2009 c1 12KillerGeishaYumi
Bleh. There's always somebody who does those rescues. I don't have this game, but I can't stand to leave anyone in danger in games like these.
12KillerGeishaYumiBleh. There's always somebody who does those rescues. I don't have this game, but I can't stand to leave anyone in danger in games like these.
6/24/2009 c1 19tail-Naruto
Oh man... you just made me feel so guilty... I usually do the missions that say, "Save My Baby!" though...
An excellent oneshot.
19tail-NarutoOh man... you just made me feel so guilty... I usually do the missions that say, "Save My Baby!" though...
An excellent oneshot.
6/8/2009 c1 2Nirazilaa
Awesome story. It really makes a person guilty. For a Lucario-Rank or Master Rank, I really must be growing soft... I just did an E-Rank. Great job, and Korsan's parting response made me actually laugh, because when he sucked his claw, it was probably to get rid of the blood. ^^
2NirazilaaAwesome story. It really makes a person guilty. For a Lucario-Rank or Master Rank, I really must be growing soft... I just did an E-Rank. Great job, and Korsan's parting response made me actually laugh, because when he sucked his claw, it was probably to get rid of the blood. ^^
5/7/2009 c1 23The Final Lament
I'm happy to say i have a diamond rank rescue team and still occaisionally take E rank missions, or D rank escorts.
I must say that pidgey was rather evil
23The Final LamentI'm happy to say i have a diamond rank rescue team and still occaisionally take E rank missions, or D rank escorts.
I must say that pidgey was rather evil
4/24/2009 c1 pyrosco
I now feel bad becaus I take the missions with the awesome rewards poor pichu.
I now feel bad becaus I take the missions with the awesome rewards poor pichu.
4/23/2009 c1 BlackKnight
Dear God that Poor Little Pichu, But Unfornately its a true thing that most only work for money. but to ignore a plee for help, to save a young baby and have no one help her thats cold really cold . And dont even get my Started on that damn Zangoose, who not only had the Gal to kill little Kala but to turn around and criticize her mother too. I hope someone kills him in the most painful way possible.
I love this little Short Story too bad its only a one shot. I would love to see that Zangoose get torn limb from limb.
Dear God that Poor Little Pichu, But Unfornately its a true thing that most only work for money. but to ignore a plee for help, to save a young baby and have no one help her thats cold really cold . And dont even get my Started on that damn Zangoose, who not only had the Gal to kill little Kala but to turn around and criticize her mother too. I hope someone kills him in the most painful way possible.
I love this little Short Story too bad its only a one shot. I would love to see that Zangoose get torn limb from limb.
2/8/2009 c1 Sevi
This is so sad! Y'know they shoulda do it anyway!
This is so sad! Y'know they shoulda do it anyway!