
12/7/2008 c5 kataanglover
cool. i like the last part.it was funny ! i wonder if there is a continued side to this... by the way i like your other story too!
cool. i like the last part.it was funny ! i wonder if there is a continued side to this... by the way i like your other story too!
12/6/2008 c3 kataanglover
wow amazing! it's awesome.
wow amazing! it's awesome.
10/8/2008 c6 Plainsarcasm
Ugh. All right, the ending of this one is disgusting and stupid.
Ugh. All right, the ending of this one is disgusting and stupid.
10/8/2008 c5 Plainsarcasm
I hope you don't think that just because my name is 'Plainsarcasm' means that I am not serious about these comments.
I hope you don't think that just because my name is 'Plainsarcasm' means that I am not serious about these comments.
10/8/2008 c3 Plainsarcasm
Nice imagination but OOC AGAIN.
Nice imagination but OOC AGAIN.
10/8/2008 c2 Plainsarcasm
AANG DOES NOT CURSE. HE DOES NOT CONFESS HIS LOVE FOR KATARA EVERY FIVE FRICKEN SECONDS.
AANG DOES NOT CURSE. HE DOES NOT CONFESS HIS LOVE FOR KATARA EVERY FIVE FRICKEN SECONDS.
10/8/2008 c1 Plainsarcasm
First of all Aang wouldn't agree that he hated Sokka and the characters are just so OOC in your tid-bits. I am a sole Kataanger in my house and i am annoyed by that, i love kataang but i can't go with this. I wiil continue to read only because I want to see what you say about the day of black sun.
First of all Aang wouldn't agree that he hated Sokka and the characters are just so OOC in your tid-bits. I am a sole Kataanger in my house and i am annoyed by that, i love kataang but i can't go with this. I wiil continue to read only because I want to see what you say about the day of black sun.
10/6/2008 c7
1imotel
yeah, it does have that sort of feeling, seeing someone you like take off their clothes...
wait a moment for it to sink in
I live at a swimming pool, i like someone who does swimming training with me... jeez a dirty mind... lol

yeah, it does have that sort of feeling, seeing someone you like take off their clothes...
wait a moment for it to sink in
I live at a swimming pool, i like someone who does swimming training with me... jeez a dirty mind... lol
4/8/2008 c12
6PagingDoctor502
Hey! This story has great potential. You can go so far with this story. It's has so many characteristics romance, drama, gruel, adventure. Please continue the story. IF you won't...well lots of people will be very mad. Update soon!

Hey! This story has great potential. You can go so far with this story. It's has so many characteristics romance, drama, gruel, adventure. Please continue the story. IF you won't...well lots of people will be very mad. Update soon!
2/12/2008 c12
6Sifu Blind Bandit
It's been about a year and you still haven't updated your "Captive" story. Please do, I need to see the rest of the story. please, Please, PLease, PLEase, PLEAse, PLEASe, PLEASE! It was really good. Suspense and Romance is my kind of story.

It's been about a year and you still haven't updated your "Captive" story. Please do, I need to see the rest of the story. please, Please, PLease, PLEase, PLEAse, PLEASe, PLEASE! It was really good. Suspense and Romance is my kind of story.
12/31/2007 c11 sara
ok im a tom boy thats all there is to it i love fluff 2 butt i never cry i mean never cry ever u made me cry w/ all the stuff about aang dieing i mean come on it was so sad i wish i had never read it cause now i hav to read on too c if he really dies but still god job
(esp if u were going 4 the cry efect)
ok im a tom boy thats all there is to it i love fluff 2 butt i never cry i mean never cry ever u made me cry w/ all the stuff about aang dieing i mean come on it was so sad i wish i had never read it cause now i hav to read on too c if he really dies but still god job
(esp if u were going 4 the cry efect)
12/31/2007 c8 SARA
UR NOT BE'EN FUNNY W/ UR I DONT OWN AVATARS PLEASE STEP UP W/ THE FUNNY
UR NOT BE'EN FUNNY W/ UR I DONT OWN AVATARS PLEASE STEP UP W/ THE FUNNY
11/19/2007 c12 Trilobitemk7
I'm really wondering what the hell Azula is up too.. and how it will blow up in her face.
I'm really wondering what the hell Azula is up too.. and how it will blow up in her face.
11/19/2007 c7 Trilobitemk7
I was thinking more along the lines of "how old was she againg" and "i pity the guy with the arrows"
I was thinking more along the lines of "how old was she againg" and "i pity the guy with the arrows"