for Kataang Purge: The Drabbles2/19/2007 c12 
7crailis
Ohmygod.. Oh.. my god... That was.. scary, almost. I was seriously twitching when she cut at the back of his knee. It just /sounded/ painful. And you describe it so well. Just.. wow. ;_;
Wonderful...
7crailisOhmygod.. Oh.. my god... That was.. scary, almost. I was seriously twitching when she cut at the back of his knee. It just /sounded/ painful. And you describe it so well. Just.. wow. ;_;
Wonderful...
2/19/2007 c12 kataangfan22
Poor poor Aang! How can you stand writing this stuff? (not to say that it's bad) How could the torture get any worse? Katara'd better come for him soon!
Poor poor Aang! How can you stand writing this stuff? (not to say that it's bad) How could the torture get any worse? Katara'd better come for him soon!
2/19/2007 c12 29nooneheretowrite
*twitch* That was gruesome...and really sad.
I want to know what crazy Azula is thinking in her evil, evil mind? Her plan is weird..that's for sure. She even is so cruel to Aang.
C'mon Katara! Get him back!
That was really good by the way...I'll be waiting.
29nooneheretowrite*twitch* That was gruesome...and really sad.
I want to know what crazy Azula is thinking in her evil, evil mind? Her plan is weird..that's for sure. She even is so cruel to Aang.
C'mon Katara! Get him back!
That was really good by the way...I'll be waiting.
2/18/2007 c11 7Princess Yue
I think you got Azula. After she shot Aang down in Crossroads of Destiny, I think there's nothing she won't do to get what she wants. Not that I thought she hadn't been like that before, but...
Great chapter, updated quickly. I'm scared for Aang. How could he let her take him so easily? Wah... looking foreword to your next update.
7Princess YueI think you got Azula. After she shot Aang down in Crossroads of Destiny, I think there's nothing she won't do to get what she wants. Not that I thought she hadn't been like that before, but...
Great chapter, updated quickly. I'm scared for Aang. How could he let her take him so easily? Wah... looking foreword to your next update.
2/18/2007 c11 4KrystalFruit22
Azula's gonna torcher Aang? Poor poor guy, he's so brave, this story's gonna have a happy ending right?
Update soon!
4KrystalFruit22Azula's gonna torcher Aang? Poor poor guy, he's so brave, this story's gonna have a happy ending right?
Update soon!
2/18/2007 c11 9frozenheat
...You made me cry.
Seriously this chapter was pretty deep, for lack of a better word. Poor Aang is all I can really think of at the moment, oh, and 'DIE AZULA!' comes into mind alot. I don't know whether you should make this into a seperate fic, up to you really. I just hope you update soon.
Ah yes and thanks for deciding to continue with 'Life Of A Monk.' ^_^
9frozenheat...You made me cry.
Seriously this chapter was pretty deep, for lack of a better word. Poor Aang is all I can really think of at the moment, oh, and 'DIE AZULA!' comes into mind alot. I don't know whether you should make this into a seperate fic, up to you really. I just hope you update soon.
Ah yes and thanks for deciding to continue with 'Life Of A Monk.' ^_^
2/18/2007 c11 126Invaderk
Wow. This chapter made me feel emotional, and that doesn't happen. I didn't cry, but I felt that sick twist inside.
Having Aang give Sokka the staff was a nice touch, as were Azula's lines.
very nice work!
126InvaderkWow. This chapter made me feel emotional, and that doesn't happen. I didn't cry, but I felt that sick twist inside.
Having Aang give Sokka the staff was a nice touch, as were Azula's lines.
very nice work!
2/18/2007 c11 8Kumori Doragon
I think you did Azula pretty well: psychotic, evil, pain-inflicting. I don't really picture her saying the word 'cute' though. What absolutely amazed me about this chapter was the fact that I can see this happening in my head, almost like an actual episode. I don't think they'd take it this far because it's a kid's show. But if it wasn't I would definitely expect something like this. And you wrote it well. The emotion was raw and subtle. The dialogue flowed and fit with the character who said it. All in all a wonderful story that I can't wait to read more of.
KD
P.S.- When can I stop rubbing my tummy and patting my head?
8Kumori DoragonI think you did Azula pretty well: psychotic, evil, pain-inflicting. I don't really picture her saying the word 'cute' though. What absolutely amazed me about this chapter was the fact that I can see this happening in my head, almost like an actual episode. I don't think they'd take it this far because it's a kid's show. But if it wasn't I would definitely expect something like this. And you wrote it well. The emotion was raw and subtle. The dialogue flowed and fit with the character who said it. All in all a wonderful story that I can't wait to read more of.
KD
P.S.- When can I stop rubbing my tummy and patting my head?
2/17/2007 c10 7Princess Yue
So, Aang's dark side comes out. I like it and I'm curious to know where you go with it. I can't remember if I reviewed any of the others, but I loved them all, especially the fight one. One bit of criticism - it would be better if you didn't use numbers. For example, if you said the 3 friends, it would be better if you said the three friends - you know, spell the word out. Don't mean to nitpick, just my opinion. It would make it more formal.
Keep up the good work!
7Princess YueSo, Aang's dark side comes out. I like it and I'm curious to know where you go with it. I can't remember if I reviewed any of the others, but I loved them all, especially the fight one. One bit of criticism - it would be better if you didn't use numbers. For example, if you said the 3 friends, it would be better if you said the three friends - you know, spell the word out. Don't mean to nitpick, just my opinion. It would make it more formal.
Keep up the good work!
2/17/2007 c10 9frozenheat
Sad that you abandoned 'Day Of Black Sun.' Though I beg that you dont abandon 'Life Of A Monk.' I really think that story has alot of potential.
As for this...wow. Aang's anger is portrayed well and for once a capture fic is realistic. Good job and I hope we see another update soon ^_^
9frozenheatSad that you abandoned 'Day Of Black Sun.' Though I beg that you dont abandon 'Life Of A Monk.' I really think that story has alot of potential.
As for this...wow. Aang's anger is portrayed well and for once a capture fic is realistic. Good job and I hope we see another update soon ^_^
2/17/2007 c10 8Kumori Doragon
Well, even though I enjoy those kinds of scenes, I'm going to rub my tummy and pat my head, just to make you laugh.
I really enjoyed this beginning. I can totally see Aang getting to the point where he feels that way. The characters were IC. I do have on nit-pick though. During the flashback, you used the wrong word. Here, I'll copy and paste.
"...staring at the crumpled mass that lied at the base of the tree."
Shouldn't that by 'lay' instead of 'lied'? Well, that's my only critique. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next installment!
KD
8Kumori DoragonWell, even though I enjoy those kinds of scenes, I'm going to rub my tummy and pat my head, just to make you laugh.
I really enjoyed this beginning. I can totally see Aang getting to the point where he feels that way. The characters were IC. I do have on nit-pick though. During the flashback, you used the wrong word. Here, I'll copy and paste.
"...staring at the crumpled mass that lied at the base of the tree."
Shouldn't that by 'lay' instead of 'lied'? Well, that's my only critique. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next installment!
KD