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5/12/2007 c1 22Starving For Attention
Meep!

Ilovedthat.

Gahh.

Write more.

I mean, more stories like this.

I shall now search thee's profile to find more.

If I don't finally, you best get crackin on that new story. ;)
4/18/2007 c1 Jaby
I really liked the playful way oh their interaction.
11/8/2006 c1 48Daniel Wesley Rydell
Amazingly written. I love the House/Cameron cult. :P
11/2/2006 c1 live-and-die
good story so far. pretty OOC, you should work on that. at least your chapters are long, that's really good. hope u update often... you need to make sure you get past and present, u use some present tense, when most of this story is in the past tense, so it's pretty confusing.

i also have a question, who said "...Myplace."? i'm guessing it was house, but author's always confuse me.

so ya... update soon!
11/1/2006 c1 22GabbyAbby
It was a very good story. But there are a lot of places that you are having a problem with your verbs. There is past and present all together and it kind of made me read a couple of sentences over and over again.

If you want I could fix it, but that's only if you want.

Again very good. I loved the handcuffs.
10/31/2006 c1 10Trosario
awsome I just wished that wasn't a ONESHOT
10/31/2006 c1 87mishy-mo
haa haa that was brilliant! I mean really really fantastic!
10/31/2006 c1 2Spoiledsi11y
I love it! :D :D :D more? Yes! PLease!
10/30/2006 c1 12anthonydinozzo
Great! i can't wait to hear more!
10/30/2006 c1 7LOSTforHOUSE
I really enjoyed this!

Good Job.

:)
10/30/2006 c1 weirdlittlemeg
Very cute...very sexy =]
10/30/2006 c1 25xyber116
Great chapter. There is more, right? Just to let you know her name is spelt Allison. Just add one more l.
10/30/2006 c1 34chilibreath
Cute! The handcuff bantering-nice touch!

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