for afterlife11/7/2006 c1 JoseHernandez
seems intrestin genough. AND FOR WHAT SEEMS TO BE A Askua and Shiji fic it looks pretty well made. So yeah please continue
seems intrestin genough. AND FOR WHAT SEEMS TO BE A Askua and Shiji fic it looks pretty well made. So yeah please continue
11/4/2006 c1 
1Animan23
I just can't. Describe the way this fic moved me.
What the hell is this? None of it makes any sense at all. At least in End of Eva, I knew what was happening. Why was another story, but I understood the what.
btw, Rei is a physical clone of Yui, so she's closer to Shinji's mother than his sister.
Your vision is confusing.
1Animan23I just can't. Describe the way this fic moved me.
What the hell is this? None of it makes any sense at all. At least in End of Eva, I knew what was happening. Why was another story, but I understood the what.
btw, Rei is a physical clone of Yui, so she's closer to Shinji's mother than his sister.
Your vision is confusing.
10/31/2006 c1 8Himonky
It needs a summary, and has quite a few problems with format. Every time you have a new speaker, you must have a new paragraph. Also, make sure to check a story after you upload it. Often, problems will come after this.
Story wise, it's only a start. I can't comment on much, don't expect a lot of reviews this early on. From what I can gather, this doesn't look to have a lot of origonality. If it's overdone, not many people will read or like it.
Keep in mind that the Eva Section has a VERY high standard when it comes to writing, and poor works will be flamed mercilessly. However, at this point that doesn't look like it will be a major problem.
On a side not, on your page you claim to have gotten 1270 reviews for a fic. Then, when I looked down at the fic, it had 10. ?
8HimonkyIt needs a summary, and has quite a few problems with format. Every time you have a new speaker, you must have a new paragraph. Also, make sure to check a story after you upload it. Often, problems will come after this.
Story wise, it's only a start. I can't comment on much, don't expect a lot of reviews this early on. From what I can gather, this doesn't look to have a lot of origonality. If it's overdone, not many people will read or like it.
Keep in mind that the Eva Section has a VERY high standard when it comes to writing, and poor works will be flamed mercilessly. However, at this point that doesn't look like it will be a major problem.
On a side not, on your page you claim to have gotten 1270 reviews for a fic. Then, when I looked down at the fic, it had 10. ?