
9/1/2008 c1
15Kattebutt
So sweet and sad I love it! Very realistic and I lie the twist at the end, though I'd have loved to see how things would be when they returned :P

So sweet and sad I love it! Very realistic and I lie the twist at the end, though I'd have loved to see how things would be when they returned :P
12/28/2006 c1
13blue sapphire lady
come on! you got to continue this! just one more chapter? please? pretty please? anyways, it was very good.

come on! you got to continue this! just one more chapter? please? pretty please? anyways, it was very good.
11/15/2006 c1
39fornwalt
Wow! You could totally do more with this story. I don't know why you have it as a oneshot... Anyway, great job!

Wow! You could totally do more with this story. I don't know why you have it as a oneshot... Anyway, great job!
11/4/2006 c1 random reviewer 2
I like it, but it seems more like a beginning than a whole story. Maybe add a few chapters? Srry, but i just think it's incomplete.
I like it, but it seems more like a beginning than a whole story. Maybe add a few chapters? Srry, but i just think it's incomplete.
11/1/2006 c1 harmony
Good job! I just love the way you write. You have a great writing style and i hope we all have the pleasure of reading more stories from you (Ed/Win please :)!)You could continue with this story but even if you didn't I really liked it. Maybe you could write one more chapter where you can write what happens after they meet...don't know I'm not a writer so I wouldn't know :( But great work and I'm waiting for more stories from you! Bye.
Good job! I just love the way you write. You have a great writing style and i hope we all have the pleasure of reading more stories from you (Ed/Win please :)!)You could continue with this story but even if you didn't I really liked it. Maybe you could write one more chapter where you can write what happens after they meet...don't know I'm not a writer so I wouldn't know :( But great work and I'm waiting for more stories from you! Bye.
11/1/2006 c1
5skylines-and-seasides
Your story is really good. Your descriptive language just enthraled me you are natrual. You writing has flare. plz update.

Your story is really good. Your descriptive language just enthraled me you are natrual. You writing has flare. plz update.