6/26/2009 c3 6Lunarshade29
This story has a really interesting plot. The fact you combined Pokemom XD and Pokemon Mystery Dungeon with the anime is something I've never seen before. I alerted this because I really want to see where you go with it.
This story has a really interesting plot. The fact you combined Pokemom XD and Pokemon Mystery Dungeon with the anime is something I've never seen before. I alerted this because I really want to see where you go with it.
7/3/2007 c3 6Aqua059
Wow... BICYCLES! Sorry, that was random. I really want to know what happens... Keep writing!
Wow... BICYCLES! Sorry, that was random. I really want to know what happens... Keep writing!
6/21/2007 c2 Elegant Spiral
Please update soon! I liked your last story and I really want you to continue this one!
Please update soon! I liked your last story and I really want you to continue this one!
5/5/2007 c3 DragonGirl
If it takes you a while to type peacfeul, work some action into it.
Please! Type more and post it up! I really want to read more of this, you've really caught my interest!
Just watch your grammar a little bit. Spelling's good, better than most fanfiction writers. But please! Do your best!
If it takes you a while to type peacfeul, work some action into it.
Please! Type more and post it up! I really want to read more of this, you've really caught my interest!
Just watch your grammar a little bit. Spelling's good, better than most fanfiction writers. But please! Do your best!
3/31/2007 c3 3Master Xanat
Not as many spelling errors as the other two stories so far. This story appears to be a bit more dark than the other two. Pretty good.
Not as many spelling errors as the other two stories so far. This story appears to be a bit more dark than the other two. Pretty good.
11/12/2006 c3 Lavender Vulpix
Splee! Update! :)
Anyway, I'm liking this more and more as you keep going with the story. Glad you're keeping everyone IC.
~Lavender Vulpix~
Splee! Update! :)
Anyway, I'm liking this more and more as you keep going with the story. Glad you're keeping everyone IC.
~Lavender Vulpix~
11/12/2006 c3 1Azure Ghidorah
DM02: Action writer, eh? Well then, great chapter and I wonder what Wartortle's speech dilema is about. Any ways, don't keep the readers waiting to long!
DM02: Action writer, eh? Well then, great chapter and I wonder what Wartortle's speech dilema is about. Any ways, don't keep the readers waiting to long!
11/7/2006 c2 sonic
please update awsome
please update awsome
11/1/2006 c1 Lavender Vulpix
Well, I'm not really sure that I like Team Go-Go being included, but that might just be me.
Onto the good points:
Everyone's been kept in character pretty well and I'm interested in seeing what'll happen next. Update soon!
~Lavender Vulpix~
Well, I'm not really sure that I like Team Go-Go being included, but that might just be me.
Onto the good points:
Everyone's been kept in character pretty well and I'm interested in seeing what'll happen next. Update soon!
~Lavender Vulpix~