for Salvation of the lost6/17/2019 c3 dommy1801
Brilliant story throughout the books... Im really disappointed you never finished it. Even though im reading this 9 years since you started Book 4 of this series. I do hope that enough people reas and review even now, in hopes that one day you might bring this amazing story to a true end.
Brilliant story throughout the books... Im really disappointed you never finished it. Even though im reading this 9 years since you started Book 4 of this series. I do hope that enough people reas and review even now, in hopes that one day you might bring this amazing story to a true end.
11/12/2015 c3 Guest
Please update your story. I really enjoyed all the series. I want to see the conclusion.
Please update your story. I really enjoyed all the series. I want to see the conclusion.
6/18/2015 c3 bookwyrven
I've really enjoyed reading this story. Do you think that you could finish it/
I've really enjoyed reading this story. Do you think that you could finish it/
3/2/2014 c3 Shinigamigamer18
I absolutely love this series! I really can't wait for an update, The stories had my attention all week, this is all I've been reading, I love how all the characters are and how well the storyline is, this has been by far one if my favorites I have ever read
I absolutely love this series! I really can't wait for an update, The stories had my attention all week, this is all I've been reading, I love how all the characters are and how well the storyline is, this has been by far one if my favorites I have ever read
4/16/2011 c3 
40Serena530
Hey there. I finally finished reading all of this. I read all the stories back to back, which is nice. It's like finding a series of books you like and you're glad that you don't have to wait for the next volume to come out. But I suppose now that I'm at this chapter I'm forced to now wait. But that's okay because this it's worth it. I really really enjoy the story so far. I like what you've done with everyone, Naruto especially! He's great and his powers are so cool. I wonder if he'll get any more summons. Guess I'll just have to wait to find out huh? I also like Hinata. I was frustrated with her at first. I kept thinking that yeah she's weak just like she keeps telling herself. I kept wondering why she wasn't getting stronger as the story went along, but then I realized that she was in a way, just not the way I had come to expect after reading so many of these stories. And Kyuubi. I like how that panned out. This is the first time I've read him being free of Naruto, and yet still connected to him in that way. I've read similar ones but yours is definitely unique. I also like how you've given Shikamaru a bloodline. That was definitely a first for me. That fangirls made it even better. Oh! And the fangirls that Naruto had gotten! Yours is the first story where I liked how he handled the fangirls and his new appearance.
Hey! A question just popped into my head. How old is everyone? I'm thinking 13 or 14 since the 2 and half to 3 year gap didn't happen right? Your story is so good that I didn't care how old they were. I still don't. I'm just curious.=)
I also like this whole thing about this demon that's going around having a dark influence on people. That's one of the things that kept me interested. Well that and wondering when Naruto and Hinata were finally going to get together.
-sigh- There's more I want to say, but it's late and I'm tired and I can't remember all of it. So I'll just say that you have another fan for this story and I can't wait for it to be updated. I hope your muse has been visiting you, if not, then I hope that this review gives you some kind of sudden inspiration.=)
40Serena530Hey there. I finally finished reading all of this. I read all the stories back to back, which is nice. It's like finding a series of books you like and you're glad that you don't have to wait for the next volume to come out. But I suppose now that I'm at this chapter I'm forced to now wait. But that's okay because this it's worth it. I really really enjoy the story so far. I like what you've done with everyone, Naruto especially! He's great and his powers are so cool. I wonder if he'll get any more summons. Guess I'll just have to wait to find out huh? I also like Hinata. I was frustrated with her at first. I kept thinking that yeah she's weak just like she keeps telling herself. I kept wondering why she wasn't getting stronger as the story went along, but then I realized that she was in a way, just not the way I had come to expect after reading so many of these stories. And Kyuubi. I like how that panned out. This is the first time I've read him being free of Naruto, and yet still connected to him in that way. I've read similar ones but yours is definitely unique. I also like how you've given Shikamaru a bloodline. That was definitely a first for me. That fangirls made it even better. Oh! And the fangirls that Naruto had gotten! Yours is the first story where I liked how he handled the fangirls and his new appearance.
Hey! A question just popped into my head. How old is everyone? I'm thinking 13 or 14 since the 2 and half to 3 year gap didn't happen right? Your story is so good that I didn't care how old they were. I still don't. I'm just curious.=)
I also like this whole thing about this demon that's going around having a dark influence on people. That's one of the things that kept me interested. Well that and wondering when Naruto and Hinata were finally going to get together.
-sigh- There's more I want to say, but it's late and I'm tired and I can't remember all of it. So I'll just say that you have another fan for this story and I can't wait for it to be updated. I hope your muse has been visiting you, if not, then I hope that this review gives you some kind of sudden inspiration.=)
4/12/2011 c3 troutman30
It's a shame you lost you inspiration for this especially after spending a little over five years on the series. It's understandable considering how Kishimato's story has veared away from anything anyone could have expected.
It's nice, your series is so far fron canon it's refreshing, hopefully you'll find your muse to continue.
It's a shame you lost you inspiration for this especially after spending a little over five years on the series. It's understandable considering how Kishimato's story has veared away from anything anyone could have expected.
It's nice, your series is so far fron canon it's refreshing, hopefully you'll find your muse to continue.
8/31/2010 c3 Shiso no Kitsune
I've just read books 1 to 3 as well as this, and aside from some oh-so basic spelling mistakes and the layout to a minor degree, this is pretty good.
The spelling mistakes are for things like 'Jutsu' and 'Shuriken' along with some others that can be rectified on the fly with Google.
The layout problem is also easily fixed, but a glaring fault in an otherwise well thought out fic. When you change the scene or perspective start a new paragraph by either double spacing or some other obvious break between scenes.
Other than my pet peeve of having the jutsu in romaji (but that's the otaku talking XD) this is a great piece of work, with well written fights and enough (sexual)tension to make a catapult.
I've just read books 1 to 3 as well as this, and aside from some oh-so basic spelling mistakes and the layout to a minor degree, this is pretty good.
The spelling mistakes are for things like 'Jutsu' and 'Shuriken' along with some others that can be rectified on the fly with Google.
The layout problem is also easily fixed, but a glaring fault in an otherwise well thought out fic. When you change the scene or perspective start a new paragraph by either double spacing or some other obvious break between scenes.
Other than my pet peeve of having the jutsu in romaji (but that's the otaku talking XD) this is a great piece of work, with well written fights and enough (sexual)tension to make a catapult.
8/7/2010 c3 hiNAru Aburame
Hi!
great chapter, I can't wait till you continu this story. ^^
greetings and See you next chapter. n_n
Hi!
great chapter, I can't wait till you continu this story. ^^
greetings and See you next chapter. n_n
8/1/2010 c3 HikariLite
Well, let me just start off by saying that I enjoy this series immensely... Considering the fact that i've read every chapter you've written for this story in the past fifteen hours. I do have to say, it's very rare that I find a well-written NaruHina that actually captures my interest, so congratulations!
Anywho, I'm really looking forward to the completion of this series, and since you have stated that you would finish, I (hopefully) have something to look forward to (I'm especially interested in what you plan to do with Hinata's new techniques!) :D
Continuing on, I wanted to say and/or suggest some things. First, I like the ShikaIno fluff you've incorporated, but I think it's kinda distracting from the main storyline. But, as a suggestion, perhaps you could write a ShikaIno fanfic to help with some ideas for this series (If I recall correctly, I think you mentioned that you got some ideas for this fic while writing other stories?). I suppose doing that would help with your... Ah, writers block? Another suggestion would be just to simply re-read or re-watch some episodes/chapters of Naruto.
As a last note, this is the first time I've actually wrote a review on a story; Most of the time I'm actually quite lazy.
Well, I'm not really sure if any of this is going to be very useful to you, but I just felt like giving a bit of input. I'm looking forward to your next chap!
Ja ne,
Hikari (Irony!)
Well, let me just start off by saying that I enjoy this series immensely... Considering the fact that i've read every chapter you've written for this story in the past fifteen hours. I do have to say, it's very rare that I find a well-written NaruHina that actually captures my interest, so congratulations!
Anywho, I'm really looking forward to the completion of this series, and since you have stated that you would finish, I (hopefully) have something to look forward to (I'm especially interested in what you plan to do with Hinata's new techniques!) :D
Continuing on, I wanted to say and/or suggest some things. First, I like the ShikaIno fluff you've incorporated, but I think it's kinda distracting from the main storyline. But, as a suggestion, perhaps you could write a ShikaIno fanfic to help with some ideas for this series (If I recall correctly, I think you mentioned that you got some ideas for this fic while writing other stories?). I suppose doing that would help with your... Ah, writers block? Another suggestion would be just to simply re-read or re-watch some episodes/chapters of Naruto.
As a last note, this is the first time I've actually wrote a review on a story; Most of the time I'm actually quite lazy.
Well, I'm not really sure if any of this is going to be very useful to you, but I just felt like giving a bit of input. I'm looking forward to your next chap!
Ja ne,
Hikari (Irony!)
3/2/2010 c3 17Hattori Sei
I just recently started reading these stories of yours, and I am so glad that I did. One little thing though about this chapter. Didn't you reveal to everyone at the begining of this book that Naruto was the last shadow prince and the son of Namikaze, or rather Uzumaki, Minato when Hiashi attacked Naruto and tried to kick him out of Konoha? He made it so that anyone could look at the book that explained his heritage. Or did none even try to look and disprove him? Or did that happen too soon ago for anyone to do so? Was Shino not even at the wedding, not invited?
17Hattori SeiI just recently started reading these stories of yours, and I am so glad that I did. One little thing though about this chapter. Didn't you reveal to everyone at the begining of this book that Naruto was the last shadow prince and the son of Namikaze, or rather Uzumaki, Minato when Hiashi attacked Naruto and tried to kick him out of Konoha? He made it so that anyone could look at the book that explained his heritage. Or did none even try to look and disprove him? Or did that happen too soon ago for anyone to do so? Was Shino not even at the wedding, not invited?
1/31/2010 c3 1bluedragon of the 13
A very interesting series of stories. I can't wait to see how it turns out.
1bluedragon of the 13A very interesting series of stories. I can't wait to see how it turns out.
1/22/2010 c3 9Dragon Man 180
Wait... so did Hinata destroy Sasori or did he escape? And why did Jiraiya take Naruto in the first place? And did Jiraiya survive? Nothing seems to make sense.
9Dragon Man 180Wait... so did Hinata destroy Sasori or did he escape? And why did Jiraiya take Naruto in the first place? And did Jiraiya survive? Nothing seems to make sense.
1/20/2010 c2 lylenidus
please hurry with this book. this series is amazing. can't wait for the next chapters.
please hurry with this book. this series is amazing. can't wait for the next chapters.