11/4/2006 c1 fallenangel657
CUTE ^.^ keep writing...and yea i agree with fanboy it did go fast but its still really good
CUTE ^.^ keep writing...and yea i agree with fanboy it did go fast but its still really good
11/2/2006 c1 4Fan Boy 101
Not bad. Although it was a little fast. In the next story, try to put more discription into it. Make it so the person who's reading the story - has a clear vision of it. Nice job though.
Not bad. Although it was a little fast. In the next story, try to put more discription into it. Make it so the person who's reading the story - has a clear vision of it. Nice job though.