for Traveller's Rest4/7/2022 c18 Kay Stevens
Very good story! I really like the characters and their interactions with each other. Such a close family is heartwarming, although probably hard to live with. The only thing that I found distracting was the frequent misuse of words. I do understand from experience that when the muse grabs hold of a writer, the words come so quickly that it's all one can do to get them down, much less worry about spelling and grammar.
Do continue writing; I and I'm sure many others will be happy to read your next story. And thank you very much for this little masterpiece.
Very good story! I really like the characters and their interactions with each other. Such a close family is heartwarming, although probably hard to live with. The only thing that I found distracting was the frequent misuse of words. I do understand from experience that when the muse grabs hold of a writer, the words come so quickly that it's all one can do to get them down, much less worry about spelling and grammar.
Do continue writing; I and I'm sure many others will be happy to read your next story. And thank you very much for this little masterpiece.
10/21/2021 c18 wormwaste94gmai
You picked or managed a good place to end it .If this was performance art there would be several ovation
You picked or managed a good place to end it .If this was performance art there would be several ovation
11/30/2019 c18 KitKat5091
I know it has been a few years since you wrote this but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. This story was really well written and imaginative. I loved every chapter. Thanks for sharing it here.
I know it has been a few years since you wrote this but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. This story was really well written and imaginative. I loved every chapter. Thanks for sharing it here.
11/30/2019 c18 KitKat5091
Wow! This story is great! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Wow! This story is great! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
9/4/2019 c18 carla anderson
I loved the way you ended this story. It left the opening for other paths in the future . Thank you for a wonderful tale and much enjoyment. Keep writing!
I loved the way you ended this story. It left the opening for other paths in the future . Thank you for a wonderful tale and much enjoyment. Keep writing!
7/29/2018 c18 George
I am new to this group, place, etc., but I want to say yours is a great story
Interesting to read with multiple lines of interest. I know you spent a lot of time on the story, but know this, it shows. Yes it took time, but all art takes time. Thank you.
I am new to this group, place, etc., but I want to say yours is a great story
Interesting to read with multiple lines of interest. I know you spent a lot of time on the story, but know this, it shows. Yes it took time, but all art takes time. Thank you.
8/27/2016 c18 ek454
Great story. You lost focus in the end but I am so you finished it. There is nothing worse than a unfinished story. I commend you for powering through
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Great story. You lost focus in the end but I am so you finished it. There is nothing worse than a unfinished story. I commend you for powering through
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8/7/2016 c18 wendums
It's 4years since I first read this story and its still one of my top five. Thank you for allowing me to share you world.
It's 4years since I first read this story and its still one of my top five. Thank you for allowing me to share you world.
8/24/2012 c7 wendums
I am defo thinking these two could be lifebonded. I shall wait and see. Wonderfull, entertaining well written story. Thanks for sharing
I am defo thinking these two could be lifebonded. I shall wait and see. Wonderfull, entertaining well written story. Thanks for sharing
12/14/2010 c18 
71sarenelsoria
good story although I was sad when her twin died. Also there wasn't as much evidance of a strong bond between them as I would have liked. Anyway other then that it was interesting
71sarenelsoriagood story although I was sad when her twin died. Also there wasn't as much evidance of a strong bond between them as I would have liked. Anyway other then that it was interesting