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2/28/2004 c1 5Sage Eleri
Dear Golden Lass,
I am sorry you don't prefer this of Exposed version to the old one. I only lost the first three chapters, the others I still have.
Please be patient, they will be up soon.
While you wait, why not checlk out Finding Her? It's finished and I think it's one of my best fics out there.
Thank you so much for your review.
Vampyre Neko.
btw: What's Ronin warriors? I never heard of that b4... I had to say it here, my email's fucked. I'm THIS close with coming to blows with my pc.
email me back@
1/5/2004 c3 22SilveryKitsune
Silver: Wow! Good fanfic ^^ It's an author from your favorite author! ::gasp::
Kai: You can be quiet now...
Silver: But i did nothing!
Rei: Got a point there...
Kai: -; the world's against me...
Rei: ^^;
Max: ::jumps onto Rei:: You still have to give me the "stuff"
Rei: Never! ::runs away from Max::
Max: OI! ::chases him::
Silver: ^^; Continue, okie? I'm going to start writing the third chapter soon, okay?
2/19/2003 c3 Suni
Hey 'Lupe! Great story. I would just cut out "Hi"s and "how are you"s; it seems like there are a lot of them. Lol i don't know anything about Ronin Warriors though.
1/14/2002 c2 32Zorra Reed
It's a bit hard to fallow.
1/6/2002 c3 3Takatome Ichido
Okay, I liked the story. Poor Ro-chan. He's so cute... And my darling Seiji-kins...

But... (I should really stop bursting people's bubbles.)

There was almost no setting, no foreshadowing, hardly any written -felt- emotion, no separation in dialogue or paragraphs, little grammar, almost no editing...

Okay, now I'm just being harsh.

Isn't this considered a flame? Do you -really- hate flames? Sorry, I'm trying to do "constructive criticism" (like there's such a thing) but if it's not helping, gomen! (I've been looking for an excuse to use that.)

I hope that I helped or... something.

Anyways, post more and I'll be happy to read it!

Ja ne!

Takatome
6/28/2001 c2 kamili
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6/25/2001 c2 17Dragon Scar
cool
6/24/2001 c2 54Kayla Tsukino
aaaaawwwwwwwww poor rowen *cries tears to flood a river* come on and finish this please I can't stand it why must it be like this...its sooo sad why must he be the only one to admit how he feels? poor poor Rowen please post more asaP! *cries harder as she hit the submit review* why must he suffer so?
6/24/2001 c2 Jenna
Major Cliffhanger! I absolutely love this fic. Please write some more soon!
6/21/2001 c1 Jay'a
This sounds like a pretty good plot but it would be a lot easier to read if you used paragraphs. Especially every time someone different speaks. More people will want to read it then. Keep at it though!
6/21/2001 c1 kamili
please write !

ttttttttttooooooo

!
6/20/2001 c1 Gradual Decline
Yaoi? Sage/Ryo? please...

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