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3/31/2008 c16 2sliver of time
cool! its an awesome story specially the sheelloyd!
3/30/2008 c16 1A Meandering Ghostie
eh...

this chapter seemed off...
2/11/2008 c15 1SomeMisguidingName
Great story, cant wait for more!

kudos
11/24/2007 c15 crystalwolfberri
this story is really good. I started reading it and got hooked! ^^ I'm happy that everyone is still here, but lots of bad things, worse than in the game, are happening! O.O and it's gettin scary! but please update, I like this. =]
11/23/2007 c15 1A Meandering Ghostie
YAY! ^^
8/25/2007 c14 8Mr.Who2123
SHHENNA!

Poor Sheena! I could definitely see some shelloyd in there..(sniff.) Good chapter, except, a little CC would be adding some more descriptions. Your writing is a little choppy, and sometimes hard to understand, so just make sure you explain everythign. Other than that, I'm excited for what's going to happen next.

Mr.Who2123
8/10/2007 c14 1A Meandering Ghostie
oh yeah...

Loyd's definitely gonna have one hell of a time.

Sheena better be alright.

Or i will bring pitchforks and torches.

Update soon...
7/17/2007 c13 8Mr.Who2123
Wow, a little twist there! Wow, I've already read al 13 of the chapters...well, since this is on alerts, I'll know when you update! Well, that was a great chapter. Update soon!

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c12 Mr.Who2123
I see the pairings! Shelloyd and Kraine! I really like Shelloyd! Sweet! Anyways, that was a good chapter, and on tot he next one!
7/17/2007 c11 Mr.Who2123
That was a nice chapter! onto the next one!

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c10 Mr.Who2123
Wow, it looks like Zelos and Kratos are bonding in a way...lol, Lloyd didn't even know he was being perverted, and Zelos saw Lloyd with the girls...hehehe...anyways, onto the next one!

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c9 Mr.Who2123
Ahh! Yuan!...Well, it does make sense, because he loves Martel, but I want to know what he used to control Lloyd...-thinks- Well, that was good, onto the next one!

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c8 Mr.Who2123
Poor Keith...wow, does Kratos care more about Raine than Lloyd? Oh, maybe this will turn out to be a Kraine...hm, well, on to the next one! Good chapter.

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c7 Mr.Who2123
Oh no! The self destruct system! Why do they have those anyways? What if he pushes it on accident or something..? Well, that was a good chapter. On to the next one!

Mr.Who2123
7/17/2007 c6 Mr.Who2123
Oh, Shining Bind. I hope Mithos is gone for good, I don't like him that much...Well, onto the next one!

Mr.Who2123
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