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6/26/2023 c6 10Deltared52952
5/25/2020 c6 hannabannalikeapple222
Plz continue
10/6/2019 c6 Guest
keep going and try and make the chapters longer
6/12/2015 c2 Yami-daseith
You really rushed this and even though I understand making Naruto all godlike or whatever you kind of gave abilities that he could not master ujless he had an affinity towards and since you never said his chachra nature I assumed it was wind like it is originally meaning he could never learn chidori or rikieri so good idea it just needed better exicution.
5/29/2014 c1 2Clove15
Love powerful Naruto.
8/26/2013 c6 Shikotsumyaku
Naruto and Hinata as a couple
8/26/2013 c5 Shikotsumyaku
8/26/2012 c6 KakarotSSJ7
Please update
3/2/2012 c6 HowlingWolf14
Wahooo! Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank god Sakura is not the pairing. She's the bitch of bitchiness! try not to make her so pathetic. BU-bye!
10/17/2010 c6 missymoo11
love it!
9/13/2010 c6 1LunarCatNinja
LOVE the story, and I hope you update soon! ≡∩W∩≡
9/9/2010 c6 omally-dood
man this story is good i cant w8 4 the next instalment
5/16/2010 c6 fanofmany
hmm Naru/Princess Yuuki or haruna will work but your gonna have to put a reason since there both far away and are daimyos for there country. Ino well your building it up but I think it should just be friendship. Yes I hate sakura to, maybe during the chuunin exams the hokage should reveal narutos real strength and either suna pulls out of the invasion or orochi dies. Great story btw
8/3/2009 c6 the shadow overlord279
i vote for narutoxtemari. and to make ur storys better use quotation marks when sum1's speaking, italisized words in quotation marks for thinking. bolded words in quotation marks for demons/summons/jutsus being spokens, and bolded italics in quotation marks for demons/summons thinking. and when thinking use it like u were using in naruitos naruto's POV. when they're thinking it's their point of view in their thoughts. it's confusing when u don't. or u can use italisized words in speech for stressing words. and make chapters a bit longer, faster readers only take a minute at most to read this short of a chapter. with continuous short chapters ppl might lose interest. and to make it interesting add sum bashing to sakura and sasuke. have naruto work on the 'hirashin no jutsu' if u really want to use japanese words..and have him learn sum new jutsu, maybe ice jutsu...and beore u call ice jutsu a bloodline, it isn't. if u've watched "naruto: ninja clash in the land of snow" u'd see any1 can learn ice jutsu. i think haku's bloodline is he can control water(like make it move) and freeze it, and go into ice. which is why only he can use crystal ice mirrors, and the jutsu he used in canon are clan jutsu. since he said 'secret jutsu' and not 'hyoton'
6/3/2009 c6 2Oraman Asturi
Just go with a harem with temari, Ino, Hinata, and anyone else you can think of preferably a four woman group as that is slightly more realistic than having almost 12 or more people. nice story anyway.
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