for Red Ties6/29/2010 c1 
102Any Unborn Child
This was very lovely, yet tragic at the same time. I loved it! You certainly have a way with words, and a way with Tsuzuki and Hisoka. Nicely done :)
102Any Unborn ChildThis was very lovely, yet tragic at the same time. I loved it! You certainly have a way with words, and a way with Tsuzuki and Hisoka. Nicely done :)
4/7/2008 c1 coco melancholy
I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. I think the most poignant point for me was when Hisoka mentions that a small part of him, possibly the neglected, untouched part of him was actually...happy...at some form of physical contact and that even though it was nothing but for the "sadistic" "pleasure" of a "monster" he was still *needed* in someway. I mean that was real messed up and showed some real thinking on your part and it is in many ways so much *worse* than if every part of him hated what happened. I love how you contrast it with he's feelings for Tsuzuki, you explored Hisoka's emotional dynamic's with both characters in a physical sense and you did a good job of it. Well done!
I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. I think the most poignant point for me was when Hisoka mentions that a small part of him, possibly the neglected, untouched part of him was actually...happy...at some form of physical contact and that even though it was nothing but for the "sadistic" "pleasure" of a "monster" he was still *needed* in someway. I mean that was real messed up and showed some real thinking on your part and it is in many ways so much *worse* than if every part of him hated what happened. I love how you contrast it with he's feelings for Tsuzuki, you explored Hisoka's emotional dynamic's with both characters in a physical sense and you did a good job of it. Well done!
11/3/2007 c1 67TrisakAminawn
Ohkayuh...sick? I wanted to leave you a nice review in exchange, and it's interesting that the piece of mine you read and the piece of yours I read happen to include use of Hisoka's empathy/self premise and the rape incident, but I'm a little horrified. Tra, allow the lads some privacy! Using the language of one of the lower forms of romance novel on those poor boys, whatever connection be presumed between them, is just...senseless, tasteless, and more voyeurism than any form of literature, although the imagery isn't powerful enough to hit the pornography level. It wouldn't sell in that market. Too many meaningless set phrases and no evidence of actual passion, but enough vulgar 'detail' to be sickening. I know, I should have noted the rating before I clicked, and paid more attention to the fact that you're the one who writes that harem story, but I failed to. Oh, and please note that the past tense of 'thrust' is 'thrust.' The word 'thrusted' has no existence except in the minds of cretins.
You can actually put one word after another reasonably and come to conclusions that you then express in type; this puts you a cut above the mob of fools, but you rely too much on the use of cliche. Try, in future, when creating scenes of passion, to include more sensory description and less flat statement of action and intent, though I suppose just stating the physical acts might be enough to satisfy the less discriminating class of youthful voyeur, particularly the female, since they can have had no direct experience with what you so charmingly refer to as 'coming' (at least spelled here with and o and not a u) and...what was it...'spilling seed.'
The discussion of the condom was almost clever, although nothing like Hisoka, and I consider your having him claim any pleasure during what Muraki did to him a malignment of his character and an unfeeling rudeness to the world's rape victims.
This is my first ever flame. I apologize. It is not fair recompense for your courteous recognition of my own posting.
Regretfully, but firmly,
Trisak
67TrisakAminawnOhkayuh...sick? I wanted to leave you a nice review in exchange, and it's interesting that the piece of mine you read and the piece of yours I read happen to include use of Hisoka's empathy/self premise and the rape incident, but I'm a little horrified. Tra, allow the lads some privacy! Using the language of one of the lower forms of romance novel on those poor boys, whatever connection be presumed between them, is just...senseless, tasteless, and more voyeurism than any form of literature, although the imagery isn't powerful enough to hit the pornography level. It wouldn't sell in that market. Too many meaningless set phrases and no evidence of actual passion, but enough vulgar 'detail' to be sickening. I know, I should have noted the rating before I clicked, and paid more attention to the fact that you're the one who writes that harem story, but I failed to. Oh, and please note that the past tense of 'thrust' is 'thrust.' The word 'thrusted' has no existence except in the minds of cretins.
You can actually put one word after another reasonably and come to conclusions that you then express in type; this puts you a cut above the mob of fools, but you rely too much on the use of cliche. Try, in future, when creating scenes of passion, to include more sensory description and less flat statement of action and intent, though I suppose just stating the physical acts might be enough to satisfy the less discriminating class of youthful voyeur, particularly the female, since they can have had no direct experience with what you so charmingly refer to as 'coming' (at least spelled here with and o and not a u) and...what was it...'spilling seed.'
The discussion of the condom was almost clever, although nothing like Hisoka, and I consider your having him claim any pleasure during what Muraki did to him a malignment of his character and an unfeeling rudeness to the world's rape victims.
This is my first ever flame. I apologize. It is not fair recompense for your courteous recognition of my own posting.
Regretfully, but firmly,
Trisak
9/17/2007 c1 6SKIN READY
Well... somebody got a visit from the fluff bunnies! (And the lemon bunnies, for that matter!)
6SKIN READYWell... somebody got a visit from the fluff bunnies! (And the lemon bunnies, for that matter!)
9/7/2007 c1 Erika Darkmoon
Omg, this is amazing. At the beginning, when Hisoka was describing his ties with Muraki...just wow...you made Hisoka come alive. And well, the rest of it was just really good. You captured Hisoka's pov very well. ^^ awe to the some.
Omg, this is amazing. At the beginning, when Hisoka was describing his ties with Muraki...just wow...you made Hisoka come alive. And well, the rest of it was just really good. You captured Hisoka's pov very well. ^^ awe to the some.
3/10/2007 c1 12She.Drowned.In.Venom
yay! lol! I can't believe how hard it was to find a tsuzukixhisoka! like.. three pages, and it was worth the wait! That was so sweet! ^_^
12She.Drowned.In.Venomyay! lol! I can't believe how hard it was to find a tsuzukixhisoka! like.. three pages, and it was worth the wait! That was so sweet! ^_^
11/15/2006 c1 4Chrono21
*laughs like an idiot* Nice. Very nice. Poor Hisoka. 3 day coma, huh? Plus Hisoka threatening Watari was priceless. *faves* I give this fanfic five stars! WHOO HOO!
4Chrono21*laughs like an idiot* Nice. Very nice. Poor Hisoka. 3 day coma, huh? Plus Hisoka threatening Watari was priceless. *faves* I give this fanfic five stars! WHOO HOO!
11/15/2006 c1 7Dragon up a tree
O O...whoa! Hot and sweet at the same time! I'm feeling rather warm now. And i love the imagery with the red threads of fate ( hence the title, i realize :3 )
7Dragon up a treeO O...whoa! Hot and sweet at the same time! I'm feeling rather warm now. And i love the imagery with the red threads of fate ( hence the title, i realize :3 )
11/15/2006 c1 AnimeAngelRin
XDD wow, that was awesome and i cant stop laughing! poor soka! emotional overload, much? XD but really, aside from that, the fics was very sweet and i loved it. i know i try not to fave M rated things (used to, deleted them all) but i love your stories too much, and this is also a good laugh, so... *faves*
~Rin
XDD wow, that was awesome and i cant stop laughing! poor soka! emotional overload, much? XD but really, aside from that, the fics was very sweet and i loved it. i know i try not to fave M rated things (used to, deleted them all) but i love your stories too much, and this is also a good laugh, so... *faves*
~Rin