for A Strange Year3/27/2008 c3 
8alwaysUncertain
I have one word to say, and one word only... WOO!(It's awesome)Ja ne!(Good bye!)
8alwaysUncertainI have one word to say, and one word only... WOO!(It's awesome)Ja ne!(Good bye!)
8/24/2007 c2 Kircala
ive developed a pet peeve! T.T the 'street talk' in the middle of the normal talking is so annoying! other than that... I LOVE THIS STORY! you DO need a prolouge though cuz the summary doesnt really help... im just trying to help with constructive critisizm! ^^
~vamp~
ive developed a pet peeve! T.T the 'street talk' in the middle of the normal talking is so annoying! other than that... I LOVE THIS STORY! you DO need a prolouge though cuz the summary doesnt really help... im just trying to help with constructive critisizm! ^^
~vamp~
8/24/2007 c1 Kircala
@.@ the switch in talking bothers me! its like all normal and then in street talk! WTF? here's the paragraph where it switches:
“You wouldn’t. She is upset and angry with herself that I had to tell her to stop.” Dumbledore was going to ask another question but I cut him off. “Sir, you are not supposed to understand her ways. I’m not askin’ ya to but to merely jus’ accept ‘em. That’s all I can ask fer. I can’ really explain and either way ‘tis not my place to.”
and after that, all of the talking is basically like this sentance:
“I know. I know ya’ didn’t mean ta’. It was hi’ fault. I warned ‘em all and ‘e didn’t listen.”
i hope you can change that! T.T ok! im off to read chapter 2!
~vamp~
@.@ the switch in talking bothers me! its like all normal and then in street talk! WTF? here's the paragraph where it switches:
“You wouldn’t. She is upset and angry with herself that I had to tell her to stop.” Dumbledore was going to ask another question but I cut him off. “Sir, you are not supposed to understand her ways. I’m not askin’ ya to but to merely jus’ accept ‘em. That’s all I can ask fer. I can’ really explain and either way ‘tis not my place to.”
and after that, all of the talking is basically like this sentance:
“I know. I know ya’ didn’t mean ta’. It was hi’ fault. I warned ‘em all and ‘e didn’t listen.”
i hope you can change that! T.T ok! im off to read chapter 2!
~vamp~
6/20/2007 c2 6Pirate Bo
Bo: wow. interesting story. please update soon!
Ski: I agree, great story. never heard of one like this, so please udpate soon
6Pirate BoBo: wow. interesting story. please update soon!
Ski: I agree, great story. never heard of one like this, so please udpate soon
12/31/2006 c2 Elena
I normally don't like vampire stories, but your's was very good. I hope you update soon.
I normally don't like vampire stories, but your's was very good. I hope you update soon.
12/10/2006 c1 Kalilene
Your summary wasn´t very inspiring and I almost skipped over your story. I´m glad I didn´t, because I like your chappie. Maybe try to make your introduction a bit more appealing, that is what draws in readers after all.
Your summary wasn´t very inspiring and I almost skipped over your story. I´m glad I didn´t, because I like your chappie. Maybe try to make your introduction a bit more appealing, that is what draws in readers after all.