for Make a Wish7/19/2015 c1 Guest
Aww! It was cute!
Aww! It was cute!
12/17/2011 c1 animefreak4ever
I thought that yous story was really funny with Ed eating all the food then not believing the wishbone then finally being dazed . I was laughing soooo hard at that it took me 2 hours to calm down . You should really write some more stuff but for the summary you should put something like " If you want to know what happens in this fanfic then read to find out "
I thought that yous story was really funny with Ed eating all the food then not believing the wishbone then finally being dazed . I was laughing soooo hard at that it took me 2 hours to calm down . You should really write some more stuff but for the summary you should put something like " If you want to know what happens in this fanfic then read to find out "
9/14/2011 c1 
2Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit
Aww, so cute! I half expected Ed would have wished for Al to get his body back but oh well XD Great job!
2Rainbowed-Sunned-SpiritAww, so cute! I half expected Ed would have wished for Al to get his body back but oh well XD Great job!
11/25/2007 c1 48AdventureAddict
hm... cute, even though I don't normally like EdWin fics... :D
The only bone I have to pick with this (oops, that's a pun, isn't it?) is that they don't have Thanksgiving in Amestris. But if it's just that Winry and Pinako made a big turkey dinner to celebrate Ed and Al coming home, then that would work.
48AdventureAddicthm... cute, even though I don't normally like EdWin fics... :D
The only bone I have to pick with this (oops, that's a pun, isn't it?) is that they don't have Thanksgiving in Amestris. But if it's just that Winry and Pinako made a big turkey dinner to celebrate Ed and Al coming home, then that would work.
5/12/2007 c1 AAR
Cute! Please don't get discouraged. Your stories are very good. It's because of those yaoi fan girls that. I mean they are taking over the site! They just can't see the chemistry b/t Ed and Winry. Oh and for all of the EdWin fans that don't read the manga read it! You will see a lot more chemistry b/t Ed and Winry than in the anime.
Cute! Please don't get discouraged. Your stories are very good. It's because of those yaoi fan girls that. I mean they are taking over the site! They just can't see the chemistry b/t Ed and Winry. Oh and for all of the EdWin fans that don't read the manga read it! You will see a lot more chemistry b/t Ed and Winry than in the anime.
12/8/2006 c1 66Ayumi Elric
*stares at ending*
Wow. That was such an amazing story. I loved it. I only wish that it was just a little longer. Everything was describedreally well, though you didn't go overboard like some people do. I could really learn to improve my own stories by reading yours.
66Ayumi Elric*stares at ending*
Wow. That was such an amazing story. I loved it. I only wish that it was just a little longer. Everything was describedreally well, though you didn't go overboard like some people do. I could really learn to improve my own stories by reading yours.
12/2/2006 c1 harmony
Sque! I really really liked this story! Don't be disappointed if you dont get a lot of reviews...it doesn't mean that your not a good writer. I think your a great writer and I absolutely love the way you write your stories. I think you have a great writing style. Please continue writing..I'm sure people will definitely notice your writing skills and will love your stories.
Sque! I really really liked this story! Don't be disappointed if you dont get a lot of reviews...it doesn't mean that your not a good writer. I think your a great writer and I absolutely love the way you write your stories. I think you have a great writing style. Please continue writing..I'm sure people will definitely notice your writing skills and will love your stories.
11/28/2006 c1 your face
its sweet^^
its sweet^^
11/27/2006 c1 27BakaKonekoRKL
I wrote a Thanksgiving story too! Except it was when they were little. This was really cute ^^ I just LOVE EdWin. And the wishbone idea was really unique, I think.
27BakaKonekoRKLI wrote a Thanksgiving story too! Except it was when they were little. This was really cute ^^ I just LOVE EdWin. And the wishbone idea was really unique, I think.
11/25/2006 c1 AluraEmbrey
Very nice! I really like the way you wrote this. Its really believeable since they are both so subborn and competative. lol Keep it up!
Very nice! I really like the way you wrote this. Its really believeable since they are both so subborn and competative. lol Keep it up!