11/24/2006 c1 Dems
Bajeezes! I just read all of That Fateful Summer and this chapter over the past three days. I couldn't stop to tear my eyes away from it, but eventually was forced to face reality.
Although, I do tend to disagree with you on making it into another story simply just because of the turn it has taken. I was under the impression that the story was that of Hermoine marrying Draco and bearing his child due to the prophecy, not that she would marry him under force and then end that story and then a whole new part for the getting pregnant and giving birth, but yet continuing on with the same story, even though it is still technically still part of the first part's plot. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I bet it is.
But overall, I haven't much of anything to complain about because this story is just absolutely outstanding and I am saddened that I did not find it sooner. It is so well written and captivating. The only thing I would question is Harry and Ron not going to the Malfoy Manner when Harry had that dream, for he saw Draco. I mean, I know Voldemort wrote him a letter forbidding him to take action, but when has Harry ever taken orders without so much the slightest attempt of getting past them? Hmm, somehting to think about if I make any sense to you. Either way, I applaud you and cannot wait until the next chapter to be released. I also appologize for the long review.
Bajeezes! I just read all of That Fateful Summer and this chapter over the past three days. I couldn't stop to tear my eyes away from it, but eventually was forced to face reality.
Although, I do tend to disagree with you on making it into another story simply just because of the turn it has taken. I was under the impression that the story was that of Hermoine marrying Draco and bearing his child due to the prophecy, not that she would marry him under force and then end that story and then a whole new part for the getting pregnant and giving birth, but yet continuing on with the same story, even though it is still technically still part of the first part's plot. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I bet it is.
But overall, I haven't much of anything to complain about because this story is just absolutely outstanding and I am saddened that I did not find it sooner. It is so well written and captivating. The only thing I would question is Harry and Ron not going to the Malfoy Manner when Harry had that dream, for he saw Draco. I mean, I know Voldemort wrote him a letter forbidding him to take action, but when has Harry ever taken orders without so much the slightest attempt of getting past them? Hmm, somehting to think about if I make any sense to you. Either way, I applaud you and cannot wait until the next chapter to be released. I also appologize for the long review.
11/24/2006 c1 sammy102031
Nice! I love this story, it keeps you wondering what's going to happen next. Keep up the awesome work! Cant wait til the next chapter. Update soon-Sammy.
Nice! I love this story, it keeps you wondering what's going to happen next. Keep up the awesome work! Cant wait til the next chapter. Update soon-Sammy.
11/24/2006 c1 2LilyRose8807
Holy cow batman that just totally made my day I'm so excited. It was an awsome chapter but how did you come up with that title for the story?
Holy cow batman that just totally made my day I'm so excited. It was an awsome chapter but how did you come up with that title for the story?
11/24/2006 c1 1Adrienne Rousseau
alright, I confess, I haven't reviewed the first part. My excuse is that I started reading the story late. I'll make it up with this part though. Very good so far :)
alright, I confess, I haven't reviewed the first part. My excuse is that I started reading the story late. I'll make it up with this part though. Very good so far :)
11/24/2006 c1 cutzie
oh my god!oh my god! finally d first chapter!you hav a bloody genius mind starry! you hav developed d characters well!i hav juz read all the chap of part one on dis very day n got really hooked! now tat u hav released another one(this one) i couldn't wait to read it...i hav read it n execellent job well done i muz say! :P u noe wat? i can't wait for d next one !keep it comin :D
oh my god!oh my god! finally d first chapter!you hav a bloody genius mind starry! you hav developed d characters well!i hav juz read all the chap of part one on dis very day n got really hooked! now tat u hav released another one(this one) i couldn't wait to read it...i hav read it n execellent job well done i muz say! :P u noe wat? i can't wait for d next one !keep it comin :D