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4/19/2013 c1 58Starlit Skyline
Wow, this is amazing, the style you wrote it in is really original!
1/7/2010 c1 23Cattiechaos
Brilliant concept, flawlessly executed.
5/18/2008 c1 Blood-Red Angst
Good story. You did an excellent job of syncing up the letters of the alphabet to Kimimaro's story. I found it to be an interesting read.

-Blood-Red Angst
12/3/2007 c1 19niver
Choppy but nice. Very depressing.
6/21/2007 c1 ChibiKeimei
That was beautiful. Honestly, I didn't know one could fit all of Kimimaro's tragic life into 26 lines, but you did it. I also applaude you for thinking of something for every letter, even Q and X.
2/5/2007 c1 8Pax Morgana
Very creative! Kimimaro didn't need to die. Good work.
2/1/2007 c1 Rein Uchiha
My favorite lines are "Orochimaru dreamed of immortality and Kimimaro dreamed of Orochimaru" and "Killing was the task at hand, he was necessary"

He died too soon.
1/3/2007 c1 Leafy-Golden-Bell
...every review saves Kimimaro...

poor Kimi-chan...

"Orochimaru dreamed of immortality and Kimimaro dreamed of Orochimaru."

There's this weird picture in my head where they're looking at each other with puppy-dog eyes and the typical shining background...

Sends shivers down my spine...
11/26/2006 c1 4Kazekirei
*Sobs* Kimi needs a HUG! That was really good, but so sad...Poor Kimi-kun.
11/24/2006 c1 Kaite
That's really creative! I like Kimimaro, I wish he didn't die...

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