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9/25/2007 c1 XflyXawayXangelX
must have sequal please!
9/24/2007 c1 slavetothekeyboard
beautiful... DON'T MAKE IT END PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!
9/24/2007 c1 9PrincessComplex
aw so cute! X3 *adds to favs*
9/22/2007 c1 4uchiha-sasuke-lover
o0o0o0o0o0o...dis is so swet...

very good indeed.. i suggest you do a story for this one...

uchiha-sasuke-lover...^.^
8/4/2007 c1 4MakiAi
Aw! That was adorable! I loved it. Please keep writing one shots. I don't care if it's OOC.
6/27/2007 c1 3ketura
i like this one

so cute
6/3/2007 c1 1All The Good PenNames Are Gone
Too cute. Seriously to cute. I think you are capable of doing better. I read inner deamons, it is great that you are exploring a darker more psycologicaly complex side to your writing. I am not saying that angsty stuff is the only good stuff out there. I am just saying that you are a great writer and can do better than the fluff that is out on Keep on writing. I recomend reading Provoking Emotion by twitch and spaz if you need inspiration for Inner Deamons. It has a similar plot line as yours and it is really well written. You also might try an OC fic, most of them out there are Mary Sues but I feel like you could write a good one. If you don't know what a Mary Sue is, its an OC (usualy a girl) who is too perfect and has no character flaws. Anyway I hope this review was appreciated. You are a great writer and your work is really well edited, I think you are capable of going deeper though. If you want to write an original story, non fanfic, I would love to read it so here are two good places to post things like that (it is in relation to I think is a sister or branch sight) and quizzila
5/23/2007 c1 5Purple Mistress
Really Kawaii ^_^ Keep writting
5/2/2007 c1 aika.Ding1118
u r too awesome.. nd bcoz almost ol of ur stories are in my faves, i guess it is fit to put u in my fave authors..

this is COOL!

stay cool! ^_^
4/9/2007 c1 12Dawnaven
I like this story too. Hm, what to type? I know! Wait, never mind. I need to type out another chapter for one of my stories. Bye!
3/27/2007 c1 2kittygoesmeow
kawai! :3 soo cute
3/18/2007 c1 eternalwhimsy
great story.
2/15/2007 c1 2i-x3-shikamaru
OHMYGOD

WHAT AN ABSOLUTE MASTERPIECE

i loved it.

SEQUEL PLEASE
1/16/2007 c1 3Melted Flames
its cute.
1/15/2007 c1 10DewWater
Aw, that was cute!
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