for Believing Improbable Things4/11/2007 c22 
12Mirajane Scarlet
I know Lauren is messed up when it comes to guys...but I just realized something. I'm the same exact way when it comes to liking a guy. So I'm messed up too. lol. Just had to mention that.
12Mirajane ScarletI know Lauren is messed up when it comes to guys...but I just realized something. I'm the same exact way when it comes to liking a guy. So I'm messed up too. lol. Just had to mention that.
4/11/2007 c21 Mirajane Scarlet
Cool. It's interesting when people use original scenes and write them their own way. And I love the ending part with all the random descriptions.
Cool. It's interesting when people use original scenes and write them their own way. And I love the ending part with all the random descriptions.
4/10/2007 c19 Mirajane Scarlet
I know there are already songs picked out for these chapters and all, but still, the perfect song for this part, well, according to Lauren's view of things anyway, is "Behind these hazel eyes" by Kelly Clarkson. The song goes with everything that happened pretty much perfectly.
I know there are already songs picked out for these chapters and all, but still, the perfect song for this part, well, according to Lauren's view of things anyway, is "Behind these hazel eyes" by Kelly Clarkson. The song goes with everything that happened pretty much perfectly.
4/10/2007 c17 Mirajane Scarlet
As with the other sex scene in that one-shot fic, it was awesome. You write those scenes really well, some people can't pull it off, but you write that sort of scene really well. I could easily make a joke about asking you about personal experience, because this is so well written, but I know it is possible to write that sort of a scene without actually having experience. :)
As with the other sex scene in that one-shot fic, it was awesome. You write those scenes really well, some people can't pull it off, but you write that sort of scene really well. I could easily make a joke about asking you about personal experience, because this is so well written, but I know it is possible to write that sort of a scene without actually having experience. :)
4/10/2007 c14 Mirajane Scarlet
..you said that Sam has no powers of his own. Only he does. I just realized now that that whole part of the story has been left out...but that was great, the whole part with the brests and all. lol.
..you said that Sam has no powers of his own. Only he does. I just realized now that that whole part of the story has been left out...but that was great, the whole part with the brests and all. lol.
4/10/2007 c13 Mirajane Scarlet
Hee Hee. YAY! This fic makes me happy. And I love the details you use in your writing. And haha, are you tired of me yet?
Hee Hee. YAY! This fic makes me happy. And I love the details you use in your writing. And haha, are you tired of me yet?
4/10/2007 c11 Mirajane Scarlet
All guys should know that when a girl specifically uses the word 'fine' they should duck for cover. haha. Pretty much all I had to say on that chapter. Well, that, and as for writing styles its cool, but since there are more characters, more names are used, which makes it different than past chapters written this way. Not in a really bad way, or anything, just different.
All guys should know that when a girl specifically uses the word 'fine' they should duck for cover. haha. Pretty much all I had to say on that chapter. Well, that, and as for writing styles its cool, but since there are more characters, more names are used, which makes it different than past chapters written this way. Not in a really bad way, or anything, just different.
4/10/2007 c10 Mirajane Scarlet
Hee hee. Wonderful. I loved it. Especially the part where you mention Jared Padalecki and Jensen Ackles. That's just really funny. And I am such a fangirl. lol. But then so is everyone else on this site...so I guess it balances out.
Hee hee. Wonderful. I loved it. Especially the part where you mention Jared Padalecki and Jensen Ackles. That's just really funny. And I am such a fangirl. lol. But then so is everyone else on this site...so I guess it balances out.
4/9/2007 c7 Mirajane Scarlet
Until you said Sharika was her best friend, it seemed a little bit like they were more like lovers. Not that I actually thought they were, but it could be seen like they were. Just kinda thought that was funny.
Until you said Sharika was her best friend, it seemed a little bit like they were more like lovers. Not that I actually thought they were, but it could be seen like they were. Just kinda thought that was funny.
4/9/2007 c5 Mirajane Scarlet
Okay, I officially love you. Well, I love this story. lol. haha. But I'm sure you get that a lot, huh? lol. I love the way you describe stuff, and just pretty much love everything. It's a very good story.
Okay, I officially love you. Well, I love this story. lol. haha. But I'm sure you get that a lot, huh? lol. I love the way you describe stuff, and just pretty much love everything. It's a very good story.
4/9/2007 c4 Mirajane Scarlet
You have a very interesting writing style. I've never really seen anybody write like that before. I mean, I know of it and all, but I've never actually seen that sort of style used. So that's cool. I liked this chapter and I like the whole Dean/Lauren thing. She's a good character, and not at all mary sue-ish, I hate it when people add new characters and make them mary-sues. And yes, I know I'm reviewing like really old chapters, but I always do. I just think of it as if it was my story, like if it was my story, I'd still want people to review it, even if it had been written a while ago.
You have a very interesting writing style. I've never really seen anybody write like that before. I mean, I know of it and all, but I've never actually seen that sort of style used. So that's cool. I liked this chapter and I like the whole Dean/Lauren thing. She's a good character, and not at all mary sue-ish, I hate it when people add new characters and make them mary-sues. And yes, I know I'm reviewing like really old chapters, but I always do. I just think of it as if it was my story, like if it was my story, I'd still want people to review it, even if it had been written a while ago.
4/9/2007 c2 Mirajane Scarlet
Interesting writing style. And an interesting story too. I'll have to read the rest of it to find out what happens! Very cool.
Interesting writing style. And an interesting story too. I'll have to read the rest of it to find out what happens! Very cool.
4/9/2007 c31 9The Goddess Aurora
Can you say hooked? Read the whole thing in one night and can't wait for more.
Your characters are amazing, is Lauren a empath then? I get that vibe sometimes.
I adore the way you write and the way you offset each chapter by using different POV's is truly unique. Not to mention the incorporation of quotes and description.
Counting the day to Sunday,
Aurora
9The Goddess AuroraCan you say hooked? Read the whole thing in one night and can't wait for more.
Your characters are amazing, is Lauren a empath then? I get that vibe sometimes.
I adore the way you write and the way you offset each chapter by using different POV's is truly unique. Not to mention the incorporation of quotes and description.
Counting the day to Sunday,
Aurora
4/8/2007 c31 Neha
NO! They are gonna fight! Ok, maybe they need to get all the feelings out. But stil...
Please don't let Sharika leave! I like her and she's good for Sam and she likes him. And she's kinda becoming friends with Dean. And...ok, I'm rambling now. *smiles sheepishly*
Well, well, well. Lauren's abilities are becoming even more powerful. She heard Sharika's thought this time! I only wish that would happen around Dean when he is thinking of her... *sigh*
I loved the fact that you put them in room number 13. Everything is bound to go wrong in there!
So, next sunday huh? Well, I'll just have to wait to see what happens! Can't wait!
NO! They are gonna fight! Ok, maybe they need to get all the feelings out. But stil...
Please don't let Sharika leave! I like her and she's good for Sam and she likes him. And she's kinda becoming friends with Dean. And...ok, I'm rambling now. *smiles sheepishly*
Well, well, well. Lauren's abilities are becoming even more powerful. She heard Sharika's thought this time! I only wish that would happen around Dean when he is thinking of her... *sigh*
I loved the fact that you put them in room number 13. Everything is bound to go wrong in there!
So, next sunday huh? Well, I'll just have to wait to see what happens! Can't wait!