5/9/2008 c38 9Through Darkness
Ooh for plot-iness. Very exciting.

Your sex scenes are hot, your characterization is brilliant, your conversations are witty and your action bits are well paced.

This piece in general, is phenomenal.

I didn't even like Lauren (or Sharika, for that matter, who I keep thinking of as Shakira) when she first entered this story, but kept reading with the hope of the glimmering potential.

Boy, do you deliver. Yowza.

I hope you come back and update soon.

-

Through Darkness and Light /|x|\

1/2/2008 c1 kelly
hey, your story is unbelievable i've been reading it for over a year now but i think it's finally gotten to the point where i've given up on it being updated.. you were fantastic, everything about your story and your writing.. it's an amazing story, good luck in the future

11/4/2007 c38 Kat
I love all your stories. I'm still waiting for chapter 39, please put it up i'm dying to know what happens. please please please I'm going insane.

9/5/2007 c38 3naughty teacup
I haven't reviewed in a long time, have I? I meant to do it and then... it just didn't happen. You probably don't even remember moi. Oh, well :3

I love this chapter, as all your chapters. I've already said I'm a fan of the "choppy writing". Short sentences and just singular words to underline a point. Yay! And this chapter is basically just smut. Which is awesome.

I'm waiting for another chapter. I've waited for months now *will shut up seeing she procrastinates just as much herself*. Anyhoot, hope to see your hiatus ending soon!

~Nini (formerly isel1lja)

8/23/2007 c38 6SophieM19
This story is so riveting that i finished it all in just a matter of hours. Im sad to see that you havent updated in a while. You dont understand how peeved i'd be if you've suddenly given up. You're writing is absolute amazement. The sexual tension between Lauren and Dean is so hot, and just the way everything plays out is addicting. Please continue, and if you arent going to, just tell me so that i wouldnt wait.

XOXO

Sophie

8/5/2007 c38 FutureMrs.Ackles
OMG! Can you please update this story! I am on pins and needles here! I love how you put Lauren's little thoughts in between the sentences. PLEASE UPDATE!

7/10/2007 c15 snowchic92
*jaw drops to floor*

hohihihod

him honna hscream!

*picks jaw up*

that's better!

WOW.

shock much?

i love this alt. uni as much as never would have guessed.

Britt