
3/15/2017 c1 jesus
thanks for the nut m8
thanks for the nut m8
1/7/2017 c1 Free Doug 2k17
Wow, really riveting world building! Not sure your verb choice really captured the "essence" of Doug's passion. Instead of 'removed', try "tore off with an inhuman quickness awakened by a feeling deep in his gut: a nameless feeling that reminded him of dry summers and of sweat mingled with blood. That fire raged beneath his skin as his cock stiffened. To Doug, it was beautiful even as it consumed him." Just a tip for the future, but it's a great start. Look forward to reading more from you!
Wow, really riveting world building! Not sure your verb choice really captured the "essence" of Doug's passion. Instead of 'removed', try "tore off with an inhuman quickness awakened by a feeling deep in his gut: a nameless feeling that reminded him of dry summers and of sweat mingled with blood. That fire raged beneath his skin as his cock stiffened. To Doug, it was beautiful even as it consumed him." Just a tip for the future, but it's a great start. Look forward to reading more from you!
9/5/2014 c1 Macedon
You don't serve that much time in juvenile hall for rape. His record would be swept clean when he turns 18 since the crime was when he was a minor.
Unless the law charged him as an adult. He would not be in Juvenile hall, he would be in prison.
I think you need to learn more about the law system, it feels to me by reading this story you are young and still learning.
You don't serve that much time in juvenile hall for rape. His record would be swept clean when he turns 18 since the crime was when he was a minor.
Unless the law charged him as an adult. He would not be in Juvenile hall, he would be in prison.
I think you need to learn more about the law system, it feels to me by reading this story you are young and still learning.
7/14/2014 c1 pegaesister
I like this story it's hilarious and I may not be a 90's kid but this is funny hell you should write more Doug fan fics just like this one but a little different like skeeter gets a girlfriend and something happened oh oh oh or roger and Judy.
I like this story it's hilarious and I may not be a 90's kid but this is funny hell you should write more Doug fan fics just like this one but a little different like skeeter gets a girlfriend and something happened oh oh oh or roger and Judy.
10/17/2012 c1 wut
Pretty sure I read a King of the Hill fanfic with these exact same words, but with King of the Hill characters instead of Doug.
It was by Shinjinator.
Pretty sure I read a King of the Hill fanfic with these exact same words, but with King of the Hill characters instead of Doug.
It was by Shinjinator.
11/5/2011 c1 Reader
best doug fanfic ever! Who am I kidding this beats the show even
best doug fanfic ever! Who am I kidding this beats the show even
10/2/2008 c1
237Shadowgate
The show Doug sucked. I remember when it first premiered with Ren and Stimpy and Rugrats. Doug didn't last but damn this story is good and too bad they didn't make it into a real episode.

The show Doug sucked. I remember when it first premiered with Ren and Stimpy and Rugrats. Doug didn't last but damn this story is good and too bad they didn't make it into a real episode.
5/22/2007 c1
11Hawk-Hotlips
"Douglas Yancy Funnie"? That's something ANYONE should laugh at. But Patti/Roger? Kind of reminds me of the time where PAtti threw up on Doug.

"Douglas Yancy Funnie"? That's something ANYONE should laugh at. But Patti/Roger? Kind of reminds me of the time where PAtti threw up on Doug.