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10/1/2013 c1 myost95
Holy. Shit. That was amazing. First Jak submissive I've read, but I like it either way! Ha!
1/28/2009 c1 tama4677
wow i blush at that prat when torn cum on jak you sould do some more later
10/15/2008 c1 5x GigaByte x
i likeyour story please update another chapterpleaseit rocks.i like the pairing its sweet.
9/29/2008 c1 12AgentMaryland93
yay Jak&Torn! plz another chappy maybe more Jak&Torn 'special time'?
5/29/2008 c1 12Nina Valentine Yuki
wow u got me in to this pairing i wanna write my own fic now T-T thanks ^^
5/27/2007 c1 yukiemaru110

OMG! You rock! So hawt... MORE! ...Pwease?
5/11/2007 c1 27Alley-Oop
I thought that this was very well written aside from the occasional spelling mistake, but who doesn't get those?

So, I pretty much love this pairing, but this is the first fic I've found of them worth reading. Awesome job.

12/31/2006 c1 Terra Wolffe

Damn. Hotness.

Oh the MPD thing with Jak, Dark, and Light would be quite intresting as a series.
12/31/2006 c1 7Rachel Balsdon
great story i loved it
12/29/2006 c1 9MindfulDeception
So sad and yet sweet at the same time. Awsome. ^.^
12/27/2006 c1 14Soran Marlovic
I enjoyed it. Though I think you should have done more with Dark, I can see this as a series if you chose to. And if you did I'd definately watch.
12/3/2006 c1 15ShadowHexx771
Aww, HELL. That was HOT. XD

The story, in general, lacked a little bit... but... the sex scene definitely made up for that. Haha.

Good job.
11/29/2006 c1 4Hakoro
that was pretty good. Jak and Torn do make a good couple. ^_^

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