for Welcome home?10/1/2013 c1 myost95
Holy. Shit. That was amazing. First Jak submissive I've read, but I like it either way! Ha!
Holy. Shit. That was amazing. First Jak submissive I've read, but I like it either way! Ha!
1/28/2009 c1 tama4677
wow i blush at that prat when torn cum on jak you sould do some more later
wow i blush at that prat when torn cum on jak you sould do some more later
10/15/2008 c1 
5x GigaByte x
i likeyour story please update another chapterpleaseit rocks.i like the pairing its sweet.
5x GigaByte xi likeyour story please update another chapterpleaseit rocks.i like the pairing its sweet.
5/29/2008 c1 12Nina Valentine Yuki
wow u got me in to this pairing i wanna write my own fic now T-T thanks ^^
12Nina Valentine Yukiwow u got me in to this pairing i wanna write my own fic now T-T thanks ^^
5/11/2007 c1 27Alley-Oop
I thought that this was very well written aside from the occasional spelling mistake, but who doesn't get those?
So, I pretty much love this pairing, but this is the first fic I've found of them worth reading. Awesome job.
MORE!
27Alley-OopI thought that this was very well written aside from the occasional spelling mistake, but who doesn't get those?
So, I pretty much love this pairing, but this is the first fic I've found of them worth reading. Awesome job.
MORE!
12/31/2006 c1 Terra Wolffe
W-wow...
Damn. Hotness.
Oh the MPD thing with Jak, Dark, and Light would be quite intresting as a series.
W-wow...
Damn. Hotness.
Oh the MPD thing with Jak, Dark, and Light would be quite intresting as a series.
12/27/2006 c1 14Soran Marlovic
I enjoyed it. Though I think you should have done more with Dark, I can see this as a series if you chose to. And if you did I'd definately watch.
14Soran MarlovicI enjoyed it. Though I think you should have done more with Dark, I can see this as a series if you chose to. And if you did I'd definately watch.
12/3/2006 c1 15ShadowHexx771
Aww, HELL. That was HOT. XD
The story, in general, lacked a little bit... but... the sex scene definitely made up for that. Haha.
Good job.
15ShadowHexx771Aww, HELL. That was HOT. XD
The story, in general, lacked a little bit... but... the sex scene definitely made up for that. Haha.
Good job.