for A Christmas Carol Sharpay Style12/26/2008 c2 1520173
Merry Christmas! (Sorry for the lateness, I wasn't available much yesterday)
It's a very dark story, and you're able to get the emotion across, so that's good.
You have a good eye for detail, just remember that when a new character speaks or does an action, it goes to the next paragraph. There's a lot of potential to this one, if you decide to continue.
~Secret Santa
Merry Christmas! (Sorry for the lateness, I wasn't available much yesterday)
It's a very dark story, and you're able to get the emotion across, so that's good.
You have a good eye for detail, just remember that when a new character speaks or does an action, it goes to the next paragraph. There's a lot of potential to this one, if you decide to continue.
~Secret Santa
11/29/2008 c3 
26Girly 411
Still luv your fic! It's really original and I haven't seen anyone else write something like this before. So, yeah...plz update soon! You're doing really well with this. And I still think the ghost with the chains is Maddie! I really wanna know if I'm right. Then, again, you should really take your time and all the ideas will come to you and be a bit more clearer. :) luv ya!
26Girly 411Still luv your fic! It's really original and I haven't seen anyone else write something like this before. So, yeah...plz update soon! You're doing really well with this. And I still think the ghost with the chains is Maddie! I really wanna know if I'm right. Then, again, you should really take your time and all the ideas will come to you and be a bit more clearer. :) luv ya!
11/20/2008 c2 Girly 411
yay i'm the first reviewer for chappie numero 2! YAY ME! claps hands and jumps up and down like London Tipton. Okay, so I luvd this chappie. So dramatic and wow! That was amazing! Can't really see Shar looking like that, but wow! Great job char! amazing! Update soon! Pwease! For me? anywho...sad ending. made me cry a little. Why am I getting one of those Jacob Marley moments here? Let me guess the rattling chains is actually Maddie. Is it? IS IT? Oh, come on, tell me! Ya know ya wanna! How many more reviews do you need? I'll get every hsm fan i know to review so you can UPDATE! PWEASE! Tell me! and why do I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen to Kelsi like it did to Tiny Tim? Luv that reference btw. Tiny Tim rocks! He's so cute...and i totally get why you chose Kelsi. Small, quiet, but heard. nods in appreciation. Shar makes a great scrooge though and Ryan is sorta like the nephew from A Christmas Carol sorta...and I can see how it's all coming together very nicely. Luv it so far! Update real soon! PLZ! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz PLZ! Luv ya anyway. and so totally luv this fic. tagged on my favs! :) Keep up the great work!
yay i'm the first reviewer for chappie numero 2! YAY ME! claps hands and jumps up and down like London Tipton. Okay, so I luvd this chappie. So dramatic and wow! That was amazing! Can't really see Shar looking like that, but wow! Great job char! amazing! Update soon! Pwease! For me? anywho...sad ending. made me cry a little. Why am I getting one of those Jacob Marley moments here? Let me guess the rattling chains is actually Maddie. Is it? IS IT? Oh, come on, tell me! Ya know ya wanna! How many more reviews do you need? I'll get every hsm fan i know to review so you can UPDATE! PWEASE! Tell me! and why do I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen to Kelsi like it did to Tiny Tim? Luv that reference btw. Tiny Tim rocks! He's so cute...and i totally get why you chose Kelsi. Small, quiet, but heard. nods in appreciation. Shar makes a great scrooge though and Ryan is sorta like the nephew from A Christmas Carol sorta...and I can see how it's all coming together very nicely. Luv it so far! Update real soon! PLZ! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz PLZ! Luv ya anyway. and so totally luv this fic. tagged on my favs! :) Keep up the great work!
11/20/2008 c1 Girly 411
k, i luvd it! Luvd it luvd it luvd it! k, great cliffie! and you'll def see me reading the next chappie and leaving a lovely review for a very clever author. :) I wonder what her problem is...hm...haev no mind left for creativity, so yeah...will just keep reading though. Luv ya for asking me to read this! Really good and original idea! smiles gratefully. big hug for the author! hug :)
k, i luvd it! Luvd it luvd it luvd it! k, great cliffie! and you'll def see me reading the next chappie and leaving a lovely review for a very clever author. :) I wonder what her problem is...hm...haev no mind left for creativity, so yeah...will just keep reading though. Luv ya for asking me to read this! Really good and original idea! smiles gratefully. big hug for the author! hug :)