for Fool Lystar7/27/2018 c12 Alfa Wolfcub
Sequel, sequel, sequel. And Thank you for writing this story :) so many talented writers on here (and you are one )
Sequel, sequel, sequel. And Thank you for writing this story :) so many talented writers on here (and you are one )
7/26/2018 c1 Alfa Wolfcub
I love hatchings. I was hoping for a mutant when you said small egg, but I blue is fine. I love blues.
I love hatchings. I was hoping for a mutant when you said small egg, but I blue is fine. I love blues.
1/30/2017 c12 Beth
Seriously, this is my all time favorite Pern fanfiction and considering how many I've read, that's tremendous! You've done a wonderful job and I've got my fingers crossed that you'll make more in the future
Seriously, this is my all time favorite Pern fanfiction and considering how many I've read, that's tremendous! You've done a wonderful job and I've got my fingers crossed that you'll make more in the future
11/18/2011 c12 wendums
Nice one young un! A different but interesting plot. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Now just one more DRoP one, of yours to read. I am so fed up of other writers not finishing their work. Yours are good. Thankyou
Nice one young un! A different but interesting plot. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Now just one more DRoP one, of yours to read. I am so fed up of other writers not finishing their work. Yours are good. Thankyou
5/25/2010 c12 
3RuinofDarkness
Well, I just started and finished your fanfiction todya, and I must say that I adore it. It by far is the best Pern fanfiction I've read. I can relate to Lystar, so the story become rather personal for me, as well. Thanks for this piece, really =). It seemed like an official story of Pern. Pfft, it totally should be!~
3RuinofDarknessWell, I just started and finished your fanfiction todya, and I must say that I adore it. It by far is the best Pern fanfiction I've read. I can relate to Lystar, so the story become rather personal for me, as well. Thanks for this piece, really =). It seemed like an official story of Pern. Pfft, it totally should be!~
5/20/2010 c12 australis-angel
Lovely story :) Thanks! You obviously put in a lot of work and I think you should be proud of what you've done :)
Lovely story :) Thanks! You obviously put in a lot of work and I think you should be proud of what you've done :)
9/27/2009 c12 14Navigator101
This one was very good as well. I like how Lystar got her job. Out of curiosity since Gilda raised her and the way her parents interact with her in a way. Did they have a small hand in her raising because they seem to be a bit different with their only child than F'lar and Lessa were with their son. Maybe it was different with him and Lystar but it looked like her parents were around a bit more than F'lessans were. Then again his parents were busy playing King and Queen to Pern even if they didn't want to admit it. After all FLight and Quest along with the other books pretty much show that Lessa and F'lar took over and began to rule Pern in a way that if anyone didn't agree with their methods they would be sent to Southern. This was good and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter of Kat's tale. Will you be going through her mating to J'sor and them becoming the Weyrleaders that they are in these two fics?
14Navigator101This one was very good as well. I like how Lystar got her job. Out of curiosity since Gilda raised her and the way her parents interact with her in a way. Did they have a small hand in her raising because they seem to be a bit different with their only child than F'lar and Lessa were with their son. Maybe it was different with him and Lystar but it looked like her parents were around a bit more than F'lessans were. Then again his parents were busy playing King and Queen to Pern even if they didn't want to admit it. After all FLight and Quest along with the other books pretty much show that Lessa and F'lar took over and began to rule Pern in a way that if anyone didn't agree with their methods they would be sent to Southern. This was good and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter of Kat's tale. Will you be going through her mating to J'sor and them becoming the Weyrleaders that they are in these two fics?
6/17/2009 c12 cklammer
What a tidy, nice tale! It is quite the nice little novella about a young adult finding herself and coping with her disability and with a bit of crime story thrown in!
Very well done indeed.
Nitpicking: I'd like to have known what happended to those bandits and the undercover harper ... was he killed/ were they caught ?
What a tidy, nice tale! It is quite the nice little novella about a young adult finding herself and coping with her disability and with a bit of crime story thrown in!
Very well done indeed.
Nitpicking: I'd like to have known what happended to those bandits and the undercover harper ... was he killed/ were they caught ?
3/10/2009 c12 4Foxtale3
That was an awesome story! The controversy surrounding Bessa's death (is suicide honorable? does it take courage? Was it really better for everyone? Such great thought-provoking questions!), as well as Lystar's struggles and courage... it was wonderful! Great thinking adding in the little shots of life in other weyrs, just to give perspective. I can't wait to read more of your stories! The only think I would change would be to somehow get to know the other characters more, namely, K'beth. It felt a bit fast-passed and choppy at times, but that could very well be because I read this all at once late at night. :D Anyway, great story!
4Foxtale3That was an awesome story! The controversy surrounding Bessa's death (is suicide honorable? does it take courage? Was it really better for everyone? Such great thought-provoking questions!), as well as Lystar's struggles and courage... it was wonderful! Great thinking adding in the little shots of life in other weyrs, just to give perspective. I can't wait to read more of your stories! The only think I would change would be to somehow get to know the other characters more, namely, K'beth. It felt a bit fast-passed and choppy at times, but that could very well be because I read this all at once late at night. :D Anyway, great story!
2/20/2009 c12 Luzith
amazing! best pern story i've read yet. i loved it. great plot development and characterization. wonderful
amazing! best pern story i've read yet. i loved it. great plot development and characterization. wonderful
1/22/2009 c12 1minty tiger
This was a good story!
You showed how not everyone on Pern is perfect - those who aren't really work for what they want, and that's exactly what Lystar did.
A fantastic ending to a great story!
1minty tigerThis was a good story!
You showed how not everyone on Pern is perfect - those who aren't really work for what they want, and that's exactly what Lystar did.
A fantastic ending to a great story!