for Fool Lystar6/24/2008 c5 GinnyStar
It can help out when you are stuck, and need to find away to get out. Or writer block. Good Story by working together they can weather their problems
It can help out when you are stuck, and need to find away to get out. Or writer block. Good Story by working together they can weather their problems
6/24/2008 c4 GinnyStar
I think I have a good idea. Search Dragon. Mating and become wyermates. He and his green see greatnees inside her which would make them good Search Dragons.
I think I have a good idea. Search Dragon. Mating and become wyermates. He and his green see greatnees inside her which would make them good Search Dragons.
6/24/2008 c3 GinnyStar
Not bad at all, I had a little problem your time gap. But once I understand it, tt when better. Sorry about the spelling and english I have a few problem with both. :) Not being able to fight Thread after all that training I can understand her disapointment.
Not bad at all, I had a little problem your time gap. But once I understand it, tt when better. Sorry about the spelling and english I have a few problem with both. :) Not being able to fight Thread after all that training I can understand her disapointment.
6/24/2008 c2 GinnyStar
You ask for infromation and I am not realy sure if I can But her is some of my background. My self I was born too early and they gave me too much oxygen the extra oxygen damage my sight. Later on glacoma has killed what little sight I had by killing the nerve that send information to my brain. All I have in that eye is light.
You ask for infromation and I am not realy sure if I can But her is some of my background. My self I was born too early and they gave me too much oxygen the extra oxygen damage my sight. Later on glacoma has killed what little sight I had by killing the nerve that send information to my brain. All I have in that eye is light.
6/24/2008 c1 GinnyStar
I know how she feels, My self I am somewhat ackward, working on addapting to just one eye to see. I am learning more and more how to write revews. I understand AU and as I said before a female blue rider is not a big deel. I deside to read your story 'Lystar Fool' first so I have some background infomation on your writing and your works. I found your note at a good time when I needed a pick-me up after a ruff few days.
I know how she feels, My self I am somewhat ackward, working on addapting to just one eye to see. I am learning more and more how to write revews. I understand AU and as I said before a female blue rider is not a big deel. I deside to read your story 'Lystar Fool' first so I have some background infomation on your writing and your works. I found your note at a good time when I needed a pick-me up after a ruff few days.
4/9/2008 c12 
17RaineArilan
Silly t-d, to think I wouldn't want to read this story too. I just wasn't done with it, and I hate to review and comment on something that gets fixed or resolved later. :Grins: I love this almost just as much as the other. I really, really, REALLY do like your version of Pern. All the details are right there, ringing true without all the canon complications(yes I know I already said this.)
The only thing I can add, constructively is that in Chapter six you say 'Her face was blank, but for one unguarded instinct, K’beth had seen the flash of misery and fear in her eyes."
I think you mean "for one unguarded INSTANT" not instinct. But not to worry. Nonsense like that pops up in my stuff all the time, thank you Word/Spellcheck.
Also, not to worry about updates. I love 'em, but I can't very well complain since I haven't updated my current fic since January AND, before that I had a 2 YEAR gap where I didn't post anything. Just know that, whenever you have the time I will be waiting for that blessed email saying "New Chapter". Good luck.
17RaineArilanSilly t-d, to think I wouldn't want to read this story too. I just wasn't done with it, and I hate to review and comment on something that gets fixed or resolved later. :Grins: I love this almost just as much as the other. I really, really, REALLY do like your version of Pern. All the details are right there, ringing true without all the canon complications(yes I know I already said this.)
The only thing I can add, constructively is that in Chapter six you say 'Her face was blank, but for one unguarded instinct, K’beth had seen the flash of misery and fear in her eyes."
I think you mean "for one unguarded INSTANT" not instinct. But not to worry. Nonsense like that pops up in my stuff all the time, thank you Word/Spellcheck.
Also, not to worry about updates. I love 'em, but I can't very well complain since I haven't updated my current fic since January AND, before that I had a 2 YEAR gap where I didn't post anything. Just know that, whenever you have the time I will be waiting for that blessed email saying "New Chapter". Good luck.
1/10/2008 c12 Louise
Hey,
I loved it - bit tricky with the time thing, well done. Good story arc too. I like Cal lots. Good luck with your exams
Louise
Hey,
I loved it - bit tricky with the time thing, well done. Good story arc too. I like Cal lots. Good luck with your exams
Louise
11/9/2007 c12 Frobscottle
gr8 story, i would write a better review but im supposed 2 be asleep lol soz
gr8 story, i would write a better review but im supposed 2 be asleep lol soz
9/3/2007 c12 Lauren
Spiffy!
loved it muchly, keep up the writing.
Spiffy!
loved it muchly, keep up the writing.
7/23/2007 c12 pixie
the story was well done ,...im impressed...but lystar's name did need to be shortened to be a dragon rider
the story was well done ,...im impressed...but lystar's name did need to be shortened to be a dragon rider
7/19/2007 c12 2Space Librarian
That was really, really, good. One of the best fanfictions i've read lately. Told ya i'd wind up messaging again. Keep up the good work, and continue writing. Well got to go, it's 3:30am where i live, so bye.
Tal
2Space LibrarianThat was really, really, good. One of the best fanfictions i've read lately. Told ya i'd wind up messaging again. Keep up the good work, and continue writing. Well got to go, it's 3:30am where i live, so bye.
Tal
7/18/2007 c4 Space Librarian
Sorry i haven't messaged before, but i've had to hurry through the story. Which is very good by the way. Well i best continue reading. Very good characters...bye. and keep writing.
Sorry i haven't messaged before, but i've had to hurry through the story. Which is very good by the way. Well i best continue reading. Very good characters...bye. and keep writing.
7/7/2007 c12 2Rimmersworld
Great story.
I missed bits and pieces of it. (traveling) but overall I'm impressed.
I would have liked more fullness in the last part, with the unfolding realization and acceptance of their love. (I'm a romantic!)
Good Luck with your exams.
2RimmersworldGreat story.
I missed bits and pieces of it. (traveling) but overall I'm impressed.
I would have liked more fullness in the last part, with the unfolding realization and acceptance of their love. (I'm a romantic!)
Good Luck with your exams.